Originally posted by: Orla
Disagree about time slot, it started with 1.3 TRP which was a good start and people did tune into watch this show having expectations but did it deliver what it promised? Unfortunately no.
I am talking as a neutral viewer not a fan of his previous show.
When a show starts, the writer starts establishing the characters first then start the story but here except Pratiksha none of the characters have been established well and lacks depth. Pratiksha character had depth but still not hit the mark as the actor is not good. If we ignore Keerti's angle, what do we know about Ravi as a character? What does he do in his free time? What are his hobbies and interests? We do not anything about him as a person. There is lack of subplots too as writer is not sure how to connect it with main story.
Malhar looks like a comedian not as a villain, the story lacks a strong villain too. I am sure Keerti character was gonna stay for some more time but they FF'ed it to bring the main plot to increase the TRP. To me Keerti was the intriguing factor as she was sorted and her whole existence kept audience hooked to wait for main couple story. They made Ravi and Keerti so rootable..with her absence now. The show looks like it lost a major charm and intriguing factor apart from Fahmaan's acting. They should have shown parallels when she was alive as to why people should root for Raviksha not KeeVi.
The whole story looks obvious now unless they make Kavya a obsessed lover or establish some kind of strong villain.
Either the story should be intriguing or should have a strong FL who can act well so that TRP can rise more as TRP audience connects with FL more than ML.
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