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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sorry guys for posting in two parts and that too late . I wasn't able to post it yesterday as I promised
Chapter 3B Holi Masti-Holi dhamaka

Bunty was about to fall when Bhim held her .He slowly pulled her upwards and made her stand properly after an eyelock . The moment was magical , they forgot about everything their surroundings and even their challenge . They applied colours to each other in a loving way .They were totally lost in one another, totally ishq mein doobe . Anyone who would see them at that time would probably call them 'lovebirds' .(why no bg music because it's time for climax)They were not aware of that someone was smiling evilly at their gesture and had the biggest shock of the day in store not only for them but also for the whole Delhi .

The mysterious person points gun towards Detective Bunty Sharma . Gattu comes towards BuHim and they come out of their la la land . He wishes them happy holi and applies colours to them. Gattu goes . Then a naughty idea strikes Bhim's mind . He was about to go to get some pichkaris(water guns) , when a terrifying sight or say the most terrifying sight caught his attention , a mysterious person hidden somewhere between the houses was pointing gun towards HIS Bunty which was surely not a watergun but a real one .

What to do? How to save her? How to catch the person before it's too late? etc. , a lot of thoughts were about to come to his mind when his reflexes told him that he had no time to think as the bullet had been fired even before the mysterious person's mind could tell him that Bsb has seen him .

Just like a reflex action he immediately came and stood between Bunty and the bullet and as a result he became the target of the bullet . He just knew one thing that he had to save HIS madamji even if it costs his life but the reason was what he didn't know . The gun had silencer but Bunty didn't have one which grabbed everyone's attention towards them . No one was able to digest what just happened .

On the other side a young girl was planning to surprise visit Bhim Singh Bhullar , unknown to the disaster that stuck

Bunty's POV: I was chatting with gattu . As soon as he left , I turned towards Bhim . He was about to leave when something shocked him but before I could see what shocked him , he came and stood in front of me and in one moment he fell on the ground . I screamed his name not too loudly . I sat on the ground and started shaking him . I couldn't think anything . I had putted his face on my lap and one of my hand was resting on his chest . Suddenly that's when it hit me . I realised my hand red with blood . He was shot ! He was shot with a gun on his chest that too to save me . Why?I felt as if Earth had slipped from under my feet . I felt like everything had ended . I screamed loud enough to beat the loud music and grab everyone's attention .I ignored the running mysterious person because my only concern was Bhim . His last words were so unexpected. Before falling unconscious he said, "Aap thik toh hain na madamji". To which I replied ," Main thik hoon bhullar goli tumhe lagi haj mujhe nahi, tumhe kya zaroorat..." With that he closed his eyes . He looked carefree because I was okay .I was filled with mixed emotions. My heart was paining as if someone was stabbing it with knife continuously but I had no time to think about it . I rushed him to the hospital .


Things to think about
Who is the mysterious person?Does. he have any relation with dolly? Why he wants to kill Bunty? Who is the young girl? What will happen to Bhim?How will Bunty solve this case ? To know all this stay tuned with me at this ff beauty of life .
Time:When Muskan wishes to update
The credit for this idea goes to Pooja di . Pooja di thanks for the idea and sorry for the cliff hanger and late update .
Keep smiling
Muskan
Edited by Muskanika - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Nice one...awesome..plz update soon..!!😊😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Another awesome update Muskan! 👏
Loving it ❤️

I wish you were the writer of DD 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very nice update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: arti_

Another awesome update Muskan! 👏

Loving it ❤️

I wish you were the writer of DD 😆

Thanks, I also wish the same
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi guys! I am updating the character sketch . I know that I should have done it before but was confused for new characters . So here it goes:

CHARACTER SKETCH

Bunty Sharma(Sonia Balani): Popularly known as detective didi .A young , fearless women who is a private detective and solves all the cases .She is smart and holds a high self respect . She solves all the cases effectively being a common person and the emotional aspects of the cases helps her doing so . She doesn't trust people easily and hides her feelings behind fake mask. She has a mission to make delhi crime-free and holds no place in her heart for anything except her mission.

Bhim Singh Bhullar(Manish goplani): Special agent of crime brach . He is a happy go lucky person and a jolly cop . He is a very honest policeman with a heart of gold and solves the cases . He is a friendly person and is liked by everyone around him . He is a handsome man and obviously an action hero .He has a special charm . He loves to irritate Bunty .

Girl and guy:Mystery till chapter 6

Gattu: Bunty's sister's son who is brought up by her .He loves his maasi a lot and she also loves him to the moon and back .

I will add more characters with time and the ones not added will be supporting characters.

PS:Please suggest me a good actor and actress for the girl and guy as they will also hold importance in my ff . You can suggest any of your favourite tv couples.

I will concentrate on:
How will bsb open the door of dd's heart?
Kahani mein twist . 1 mori jodi i.e. NitYa ( Shreya and Manit) as I like more than 1 jodi better flavours aate hain .


Edited by Muskanika - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Promo
Sapne sajaye baitha tha koyi
(The girl excited to meet bhim)
Ishq mein dooba hua tha koyi
(BuHim applying colours to each other)
Ek haadsa jisne hila kar rakh diya poori delhi ko, tod diye sapne bhi aur dil bhi
(Bhim shot with gun )
Ab kahan se himmat layegi aur kaise suljhayegi iss case ko detective didi
(Bunty shouts out loud "bhim")
Jaanne ke liye padte rahiye beauty of life , sirf india forums par

PS:Thought to make a promo . How is it? The statements in the bracket are happenings in the promo and the rest is voiceover . If you like then hit it .
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Too good plzz update ur story soon..😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thahaan

Too good plzz update ur story soon..😊

Thanks a lot
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I am going crazy. You write so beautifully. Extremely loving it .keep writing. I don't comment doesn't mean I am not reading I am reading it. Post next part soon.
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