Originally posted by: parichayan
wat do u think jay should be added in the story to make it a gripπ€,
Originally posted by: parichayan
i remeber there use to be one pasand toffee high in aromaπ,n after eating i use to ask mom howz my tongue looking ππ
few things actually,first work on Nandini's character, just way to simple and goodey goodey. Siddhi had more attitude and kind of fire in herThis whole royal family nonsense is irritating. yesterday first time I caught 2 minutes of mumma's boy and god he has no speech, sounds and acts like a kid π² giving him more screen space is not working.Move beyond typical middle-class portrayal of money issue, useless bro-sis, pension matter.Gayatri Devi needs to have proper reason to run party not just coz her hubby had a dream π₯±Overall portrayal of story and direction needs to be aggressive, proper pace needs to be established while it feels whatever is happening is happening π
yes remember those days πmore than ma used to go to grandma and she would yell at us π π
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Originally posted by: parichayan
seriously jus one strong but must needed effort is needed to assemble the story in a right direction but then again ques lies will they do it or not?π
to fir AK ne hungama kiya tha ke nahi uss din π
Originally posted by: parichayan
haan stood up on gate exactly like thisπ€£ n saying aap kaise chale gaye without taking me n then after so much discussion maan gayiππ
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