Really loved the prologue yaar it was gd.
Chap 1 was amazing...poor manyata tolerating manju because of the plan uday made for the sake of their families I wonder what that would be though...haha uday arranged a party for manyata and didn't know they were married but happy they r..ohh god I didn't read about evil j for a long time but seeing her in this reminds me of the show... and even im sure she is upto something...I liked how uday decorated manyata room a really sweet gesture from him and loved the passionate kiss they shared... so manveer married in secret? And y didn't they tell anyone?... is it because of j and akash...I liked how manveer were speaking and during that manyata fell asleep in his arm...haha our darling uday always smirks.
THANK for the beautiful comment sweetiee yes manveer married ... uday is uday no one can replace him hahaha afcource she is angry if i m her place i also have same reaction like manyta had i m glad you enjoy it ur most welcome 😳 i m already updated 1.2 chappy on pg 7 if you are not seen or read please check... well in upcoming chapter you know the reason why all this happened .. akash not at all sweetiee he is not gone so early everything happened because of some reasons and that reasons i reveal it soon ... thank you for the beautiful comment😳Originally posted by: wittydragon
Gr8! I came b4 than PM. ManVeer married! Yippee !! Uday is so naughty & Manyata on the other hand angry on him. I enjoyed this a lot. 😃.Loads of thnks 4 this awsum chappy. Can't wait 4 1.2 & v.v.v eager 2 know wht's the plan,reason behind it & most importantly ManVeer party [as I cn smell romance it this. He he 😆].Akash tou ab gaya 🤣
Originally posted by: Maha-Srk
wow
very nicereally interestingplease continue soonishand thanks for the pm dear
Originally posted by: Twinkle_alisha
HEY KRITZZ U ALREADY KNEW THAT I HAVE READ UR STORY AND COMMENTED TOO ON FACEBOOK... 😃 AND SO I'M DOING HERE TOOO...😃
THAT SPLENDOUS CHAPTER... 😃AND KRITZ U KNOW VERY WELL THAT U KEEP NO STONES LEFT TO MAKE UR EVERY UPDATE GOOD INFACT BEST AND KEPT US CONFUSION... 😃BUT SIS I TOLD ON FACEBOOK TOO THAT UR UPDATE WAS INDEED SHORTT... 😛SO KRITZ KI BACHI BARHE UPDATE DIYE KAR... LIKE I DO... 😛AND KRITZ SERIOUSLY CHAPTER 1 WAS VERY GOOD... LIKED MANYATA THIS ATTITUDE THAT FOR HER UDAY AND FOR HER FAMILY SHE IS BEEN QUITE ... AND LOVED THE SCENE WHERE UDAY ON SPYING GETS JEALOUS... ''APNI MEDICINE KA MAZAK KHUD HI CHAK RAHA HAI...'' 😆 SORRY IDIOM THA PAR YD NAE AYA ASA KUCH THA HOPE U UNDERSTOOD... 😳 AND SIS I'M LOOKING FORWARD TOWARDS UR PARTY UPDATE... 😃
Originally posted by: Yurisung
👏 continue nice story
Originally posted by: Marooshmalik
Nice story
but I'm confused when and how manveer got married and why nobody knew it about their marriage
and why many ta is pretending that she loves akash
anyways plzzz continue soon
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