FF: Destined to be, Chapter 14: pg 27 *new update* (15/03/15) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Amazing update! Love seeing UV in this naughty avatar. 😳
If kabir is for unnati them what about VB?
Glad udays mom is alive in this FF.
UV will still call manyata 'princess' na or is it kabir?
Hopefully manyata will be home in next chapter

Do continue soon 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Ashvikian_AK

Amazing update! Love seeing UV in this naughty avatar. 😳
If kabir is for unnati them what about VB?
Glad udays mom is alive in this FF.
UV will still call manyata 'princess' na or is it kabir?
Hopefully manyata will be home in next chapter

Do continue soon 😛

Thank you such for the lovely comment 😊 lol you'll get to see a more naughty UV in the coming updates. There will be a new girl for VB as for now he likes staying away from them 😆 Manyata is Uday's princess so yes he will call her that but for now i need Kabir calling her that also 😃 ,yup she'll be home and a dhamakedar meeting of manveer will take place 😉 i sure will continue
Edited by roshni101 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Quite interesting dear 😃
would love to read more !
Manyata dint saw uday for long time but uday did kya? 🤔

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: perfection

Quite interesting dear 😃
would love to read more !
Manyata dint saw uday for long time but uday did kya? 🤔


thank you sweets 😳 uday hasnt actually met her since quite a few years but he has seen her pics and stuff as he is aware of the roka and this is one reason why he likes her.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Awesome love this ff please add me to your pm list for this ff when reading I could only think bechara uday cause he loves m and she doesn't and she's definitely going to kick up a ruckus about the roka as always
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priya46

Awesome love this ff please add me to your pm list for this ff when reading I could only think bechara uday cause he loves m and she doesn't and she's definitely going to kick up a ruckus about the roka as always

awwe thank you 😳 it means alot. Sure i will. Haha dont worry about that. She might create a fuss about the roka but then 'NOBODY' can resist Uday's charms 😉 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
That's absolutely what a fan of THE YUVRAJ UDAYVEER wants to hear esp fave couple MANVEER
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2

In Devgarh
VB: Jay bhai come on. Get going already. Unnati and M bhai will be here in less then an hour.

Jay while descending the stairs: quit whining vijay bhai im here. Lets go

VB: is uday banna coming?

Jay: No, he said he has to make some arrangements at Uday Niwas for jiji and unnati.

VB: oh i see.

They both leave for the airport while the rest of the family members leave for the hotel. On the other side we see Uday getting ready and looking at himself in mirror. He thinks to himself: Not bad Uday, you're looking hot as usual. How are you gonna resist my charms princess. Cant wait to see you. (he smirks and leaves for the hotel)

an hour later, At the airport:
Manyata: God, they are late. I am soo not going to leave them. We're here after 4 years and look at them. not even eager to meet us.

Unnati: just chill manyata. They are probably stuck in traffic.

Kabir: dekho manyata, unnati is soo intelligent and look at you. Were you a bull-fighter in the last century 😃

Manyata: huh? what rubbish 😡

Unnati: he's right 🤣 you're always in this mood as if you'll just pounce on someone 😆 and under her breath she says poor dada.

Manyata: you guys are soo mean 😭 always team up against me.

Kabir: awwe baby 😃 Now i'll take your leave ladies. i have to go. Even your family will be here in sometime. See you guys later. Bye shonu, bye bull-fighter 😆

Manyata and Unnati: shutup Kabir 😡

Kabir: ok 😭 Both of them bid him bye. He leaves just them manyata hears someone scream jiji. She has this wide smile on her face and turns around

Manyata: Omg jay and VB. Im soo happy to see you.

Jay was about to hug Manyata but VB pushes her aside and hugs manyata tightly

VB: i missed you soo much M Bhai. Dont leave me with this dramaqueen next time 😃 he said pointing towards Jay.

Manyata: i missed you to VB. and dont you dare call my sweet little sister a dramaqueen. She goes towards jay and hugs her as to never let go. Both sisters hold on to eachother relishing the moment.

Jay: Im never gonna let you go anywhere now 😭

Unnati: ahem ahem im here too 😳

VB: who are you? 😆

manyata and jay: 🤣 🤣

Unnati: Vijay banna 😡 😡 both jay and vijay hug unnati as tightly as possible leaving the poor girl breathless.

Unnati: feels good to be back. Truly missed you guys.

Vb: its feel good to have you guys back.
Jay: yeah, missed you guys alot. we should be leaving for Uday Niwas, everyone must be waiting.

After half and hour they reach the hotel. Manyata and Unnati both meet the devgarh and jaigarh family. They share a few light moments while greeting, sharing some hugs and stuff (skipping this part)

Unnati: Mom where is dada? i thought he would be sitting in a tent outside the hotel waiting for his beloved 😆

Manyata: beloved? she asked all confused.

Unnati: yes his beloved. Princess of...

Avanshika interepts saying: Princess of jaigarh as in Unnati and glares at unnati.

Manyata: oh i'l just be back. Everyone takes a sigh of relief

Giri: Unnati 😡 keep your mouth shut.

Unnati: sorry Dad i was just having some fun 😆

Komal: fun? you almost gave us a heart attack.

Giri: yeah, although we are still Jawan but our heart isnt so unnati, control 😆 They all smile.

Manyata is roaming around when "someone" bumps into her.

Manyata: Excuse me. Cant you see. ankhein hain ya button?

Uday: oh im so sorry sweetheart.

Manyata: dont you sweetheart me 😡

Uday: ok babes 😈

Manyata: haaww dont you babes me 😡

Uday: fine jaan 😆 Now you'll say dont you jaan me.

Manyata: ugghh' she turns to leave but uday calls her back

Uday: hey just a small Question, are you blind?

Manyata: What? 😡 she glares at Uday angrily. Uday thinks: If looks could kill i would be dead by now 😃

Uday: no i mean if you have eyes then you could have moved out of the way if i hadnt seen you. i could ask you the same, ankhein hain ya button? 😃

manyata: damn you. You know what, i have better things to do rather then to fight an idiot like you. 😡

Uday: awwe you're angry?

Manyata: listen tum ho koun? do you even know who you're messing with?

Uday: im just a waiter here.

Manyata: and im a princess. So if you value you're job get back to work before i get you kicked out.

Uday: a princess? 😲 oh im so sorry. please forgive me. I promise i wont cross your way anymore but dont get me fired. Im really poor, i badly need this job. Sorry 😔

Manyata: ab aye na line pe. Now leave.

Manyata goes away from there and uday smirks

Uday to himself: ooh fiesty, i like it. This has gotten more interesting. You seriously have no idea what hit you manyata 😆 now lets see how you react when you find out this 'waiter' is none other then Yuvraj Udayveer Singh 😈

So this was chapter 2. I hope you guys enjoyed it. Please do leave your comments and hit the like button 😊
Edited by roshni101 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
roshu i just loved it yaar this is getting even more interesting... haha loved the names kabir gave to manyata and unnati... and the airport scene between the sibling was really sweet especially where j and vijay hug unnati so tightly... loved this line that giriraj said: yeah, although we are still Jawan but our heart isnt so unnati, control to gd... manveer meeting was awesome poor manyata thought uday is a waiter and nowi cant wait for her reaction when she finds out that he is yuvraj udayvee r singh and tbh love this uday do update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: preya_radev

roshu i just loved it yaar this is getting even more interesting... haha loved the names kabir gave to manyata and unnati... and the airport scene between the sibling was really sweet especially where j and vijay hug unnati so tightly... loved this line that giriraj said: yeah, although we are still Jawan but our heart isnt so unnati, control to gd... manveer meeting was awesome poor manyata thought uday is a waiter and nowi cant wait for her reaction when she finds out that he is yuvraj udayvee r singh and tbh love this uday do update soon and thanks for the pm

awwe thank you soo much sweets. Means alot. Lol Kabir is insane. He will drive these two girls crazy also 😆 im glad you liked that scene. Lol i like that line too. I heard it somewhere so used it here. Haha even i love this uday. Trust me he will become even naughtier 😃 manyata will be having a tough time around the prince. You're welcome 😊
Edited by roshni101 - 10 years ago
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