A Hate- Love Story: Ch-15 pg- 56 (Updated 27/11/16) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Hi there๐Ÿ˜Š. I just read the 1st chapter ... and it's really nice. U have made a good start.
Waiting to read more๐Ÿ˜‰.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
hi. read the 1st chapter
its awesome
do continue soon
plz pm me if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Guys first of all I am really sorry... for updating so late. I have decided that Karan Singh Grover will play the character of Yuvraj Rajendra Singh.
CHAPTER 2
Manyata goes to her room and calls Raj.
Manyata- Hello dada...
Raj- Hey.. kaisi hain meri choti?
Manyata- Akhir apko puchne ka time mil hi gaya... apko pata hain na jab tak din mein do baar ap se baat na ho jaye tab tak mera din acha nahi guzarta.
Raj- Sorry meri princess par main bhi toh tughse baat kiye bina nahi reh sakta.
Manyata- Acha ab aap yeh batayiye ki aap yaha kab aa rahe hain...
Raj- Main to abhi nahi aa sakta par maine tumhare liye do surprizes bheje hain.
Manyata- Kya...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Raj- Ek toh Uday
Manyata- Ohh... Uday wo surprise thodi na hain... use surprise toh main dungi
Raj- Kya
Manyata- Ek zor ka thapad... Use solah saal ho gaye waha gaye hue aur abhi tak ek baar bhi apni shakal nahi dikhayi. Pata nahi aisa kaun sa Brad Pitt hain jo shakal nahi dikha raha. Acha usko toh main dekh lungi aap dusra surprize toh batao.
Raj- Uday toh waha aaj pahuchega hi par aaj tumhari Aditi di bhi pahuch rahi hain. Woh seedha party mein aayegi.
Manyata- Ab ye hua na surprize... Acha dada ab main rakhti hun aur waise bhi woh boyfriend ne (interrupted)
Raj- boyfriend ab kaun hain ye naya ladka... Ek toh mughe yeh samagh nahi aata ki mere itne strict hone ke baad aur kam se kam paach ladko ko dhamkee dene ke baad bhi yeh ladke tumhara peecha kyun nahi chodte.
Manyata- Dada... dada relax aap bhul gaye ki boyfriend yaani aapke giri uncle... aur ab main kya karun main hun hi tni attractive aap jitni bhi dhamkiya dede aap jeetne nahi wale... Acha dada main rakhti hun bahut sari tayari karni hain aur phir raat ko us Uday ki band bhi toh bajani hain
Manyata dissconnects the phone and turns around only to find J and Vijay standing behind her.
Vijay- Aaj toh lagta hain Uday banna ki shamat aayi
J- Jiji ek baar use dekh toh lo kya pata tum hi uski deewani ban jao
Manyata- ohh.pls. J Aisa koi ladka paida nahi hua jo mughe apna deewana bana sake... Waise J mughe yeh bata ki mein kya pehnu..
They select their dresses and are ready to go. Manyata was wearing this
the dress which pc is wearing.. (abviously wo srk ki dress toh pehenegi nahi... ๐Ÿ˜‰)
They all reach Uday's house...
Precap- Manyata and uday meeting... Manyata comes to know about her roka with Uday.
I know guys this was the precap last time also but can't help it, but i will try to update as soon as possible.
Edited by nityatandon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Nice ... but , SHORT! Please make it longer next time. Precap is amazing!!! Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: zil1111

That was a nice update :)

thank u very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Nice ... but , SHORT! Please make it longer next time. Precap is amazing!!! Continue soon.

thank u soo much i will try to make the next update big
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
cute but it was too short dear...continue soon๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
hey i missed ur last two updates,so sending u buddy request!!! uday and manyata moment outsde washroom was jstt awesomee and dat high heels wala dialog was gr88!!! soo manayta is planning to teach uday a lesson,bt kya hoga jab wo uday ko dekhegaa!!!! soo waitng for it!!
btw i am 21yrs,and i amm gr88 srk fan!!!!!! and my fav jodi is srk-kajol๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
and i lke karan wahi to be raj๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Very nice update and awesome promo.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
seriously god ...vry good plzzz do continue nd do pm me also
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