A Hate- Love Story: Ch-15 pg- 56 (Updated 27/11/16) - Page 36

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hey fnally got read the remaining chap and loved it
chap 12 was amazing haha i expected vijay bhai to be scared of horror films but here j is. loved the order they were sitting in especially manveer...awww i liked how j and jagat were holding hands and mnayata face on udays shoulder... haha unnati made me laugh while truth and dare i couldnt stop laughing when she spit the sweet back in the box... hayeee jagat and j kissed our j is so bold...

chap 13: i could actually imagine uday singing and the way he was staring at manyata all that time like the scene was actually playing in front of my eyes... hayee the dance of manveer and happy nobody went behind them and loved how uday was going close to manyata and how she was moving away from him and then pulled her close again but then the phone call had to break the magic...hehe how unnati knew manyata was not saying the truth and i guess we all know uday would not say sorry for something like this...aww both manveer thinking about the incident

chap 14: awww loved where manyata was sleeping on the couch as raj and uday were talking about business and how uday was going to pick her up but raj decided to... i loved the song from the film mujhse dosti karoge it actualy fitted the scene well and again i could imagine all these singing to that song...wt topic did brij and raj have that made raj go away from there... oh so it ws the marriage convo but y isnt raj ready to marry aditi... omg raj can never become a father thats y he is not ready to marry aditi thats actually sad..and manyata is right they can adopt a baby if they want and there are many ways for this treatment... im happy that aditi head everything and confronted raj...hehe i smiled when raj said nobody can slap him except aditi so sweet...hayee loved how uday came next to manyata and the way he spoke to her...hehe during the dance i loved it uday just loved teasing manyata but im happy wt he said has actually started happening they only need to relaise it.

precap is interesting as manveer r going to go on a date so please update next part soon as i really cant wait for the next chap and thanks for continuing to send me pms when i was on the forum for a while
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CHAPTER 15

At the breakfast table

Manyata: Vijay bhai kaha hai?
J: Arre woh aur mom kuch financial decisions finalise karne ke liye Dubai gaye hai
Manyata: Financial decisions?
Unnati: Kya Manyata tum bhi J se pooch rahi ho. Use yeh pata tha ki kuch financial decisions hai wahi kaafi nahi tha kya
Both of them laugh at this remark
J: Ha ha very funny
Just then Aditi brought the kheer made by her at the table and sat next to Raj.

Brij: Beta aapko yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi?
Aditi: Bas mera mann kiya toh maine bana dia.

As Aditi sat Raj held her hand. She was trying so hard to make him let go of it but he was too strong for her.
Raj whispered in her ear
Raj: I can't wait wait for you to do this for me everyday.
Aditi smiles shyly
Uday: Raj...
Raj suddenly comes out of her trance with Aditi
Raj: yeah.. yeah. Kya hua Uday?
Uday: Raj main tumse aur Uncle Brij se permission chahta tha
Brij: Permission? Kis cheej ki permission bete?
Uday: Manyata ko date par lejane ki permission
Manyata's eyes widened as if her eyes would bulge out of her head
Brij: Beta isme humse permission lene ki kya zaroorat hai
Manyata: Par dad I want to spend the day with dada. jabse woh aaye hai mujhe unke sath akele time spend karne ka chance hi nhi mila
Raj: Ahha.. Manyata mujhe maloom hai tum kya karne ki koshish kar rhi ho. We had a discussion related to this didn't we?
Manyata: Fine. I'll go
Brij: Arre hum aap sabko kuch batana chah rahe the. Humne kal Aditi ke parents se baat kari thi. Woh shaadi ki liye maan gaye hai.
Unnati: That's great. Congrats ya'll
Brij: Aaj humne pandit ji ko bulaya hai. Jaise hi woh date fix karte hai hum shaadi ki tayari shuru kar denge.
Manyata: I can't believe Aditi didi ab meri bhabhi banne wali hai.
J: Mujhe toh is baat ki khushi hai ki dada hum sabko order dete hai ab koi unhe bhi order dega.
Everybody laughs.
After breakfast
Manyata: I am so exxcited for the wedding
Uday: Koi baat nhi princess hum bhi bahut jaldi shaadi kar lenge
Manyata rolls her eyes at him.
J: Dada ki wedding ke liye excited ho par apni date ke liye nahi. Par sach mein jiji aap toh aise behave kar rhi ho jaise aap jana hi nhi chahti
Manyata: J tu chup nhi baith sakti na.
J: Par sach mein Uday manna padega. Tumhe dekh kar lagta hai chivalry is still alive.
Uday smiles and takes a bow
In the afternoon everybody is sitting with the panditji to fix the date.
Panditji: Brijraj aaj se theek 10 din baad ka muhurat hai.
Malini (Aditi's Mum): 10 din to bahut jaldi ho jayega.
Ashish (Aditi's dad): Haan paditji aur koi muhurat nhi hai kya
panditji: Agla shubh muhurat 8 mahine baad ka hai.
Raj and Aditi look at each other with a little tensed look on their faces.
Brij laughs and says: In dono dekh kar mujhe nahi lagta ki yeh 8 mahine intezaar kar sakte hai. Aur hum bhi yahi chahte hai ki jitni jaldi Aditi hamare ghar mein aa ajye utna acha hai.
Both the parents laugh.
Ashish: Woh toh theek hai par itni saari tayariyan itni jaldi...
Brij: Arre aap chinta mat kijiye. Hamare paas in badmasho ka gang hai na. Yeh sab kar lenge. Kyu?
Uday and Manyata together: Haan haan
They look at each other and Manyata is the one to break the gaze.
After everyone leaves Uday gets a phonecall and informs Manyata that he'll come by 8 to pick her up.
Manyata is in her room, deciding what to wear when J smashes the door open.
Manyata turns to look at her
J: OMG! jiji. Uday ne aapke liye dress bheji hai. Mujhe uday ko bolna padega ki Jagat ko thode lessons de de.
Manyata pats her head
Manyata: Come on J. Jagat itna acha toh hai kyu use baar baar bura kehti rehti hai. He loves you so much.
J: Woh to hai. Chalo main jaati hun aap ready ho jao.
Manyata: aree tu dress nhi dekhegi kya?
j: Uday ne strictly kaha hai ki sabse pehle aap hi dekhoge. Aur meri itni majaal ki main Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh ke orders taal du.
Manyata:Drama queen hai ek no. ki
J: Aapse hi seekha hai
With this she leaves.
Manyata opens the box and it is one of the prettiest dresses she has seen. She saw it on one of her friend's wishlist and instantly recognised that it's a limited addition.
Manyata's dress

She moves her hand over the dress and thiks to herself
Manyata to herself: Uday why are you being so nice to me. And why am I taking all of this so seriously. Its just supposed to be something I am doing because of Dada then why is it that I actually am looking forward to this date? Why is it that I liked they way you asked for it?
With these thoughts in her mind she wore her dress and did her hair (Like in the picture).
When she descended the stairs Uday was already there. And when he saw her he knew why he felt the way he felt for her, why she was a princess.
She noticed Uday's gaze on her which was analyzing her head to toe. To hide her shyness she put a strand of her hair behind her ear.
Uday stretched his arm towards her and she put her hand in his arm.
Uday: Princess you are looking gorgeous! He couldn't take his eyes off her, not that he wanted to 😆
Manyata blurted a low Thank you
They moved towards the car and sat.
During the drive
Manyata: Yeh dress Unnati ki choice thi na
Uday: What do you mean Unnati ki chice this? Hum kya tumhare liye dress nahi choose kar sakte?
Manyata: kar sakte ho par itni achi nahi
Uday: Toh tum kehna chahti ho ki meri choice achi nahi hai?
He asks with one of his eyebrows raised
Manyata nods in a yes
Uday: Tum bhool rahi ho ki tum bhi meri choice ho?
Manyata: Aur tum bhul rahe ho ki hamare ghar walo ne mujhe tumhare liye pata kar diya hai
Uday: Toh phir mujhse itni mehnat kyu karwa rhi ho?
The smile on Manyata's face vanishes. She did not know what to answer.She just bowed her head in silence.
Uday: Par sackkahu toh agar nahi bhipata ke diya hota na toh bhi meri choice tum hi hoti aur tab bhi itni hi mehnat karta main.
Manyata looks up at Uday and gives him a small smile.
To escape from any further conversations she switched on the stereo. There was a pendrive attached to it which started playing.
The song that started was Mohabbat Kabhi Maine by Sonu Nigam (Guys if you haven't heard the song please do. It's amazing)
As soon as she listened to it her face lit up and she asks Uday
Manyata: Yeh pendrive tumhari hai?
Uday nods in a yes.
Manyata: Tumhe Sonu Nigam ke gaane pasand hai?
She asked as if doubting it could ever happen.
Uday: Haan. Kyu, nahi ho sakte kya?
Manyata: Nahi bas aise hi
Uday: Nahi nahi go on.
Manyata: Arre nahi bas mujhe laga that you are the kind of person who listens to rock music and house music and basically... just boring stuff.
Both of them laughed at the way Manyata said it.
Uday(while laughing): You know you are right. It is boring.
After a discussion of which was Sonu Nigam's first film as a singer they checked the net for the answer and it turned out both were wrong.
They finally reached their destination

Kind of a mixture of both 😆

It was a personal area. There was a table set up by a pool decorated with lights and Manyata could just blurt out a wow seeing it.
Manyata: Uday this is beautiful.
While having dinner they had small talks related to their childhood and life in general where Uday was constantly making manyata laugh and everytime she did he just thought to himself how beautiful she was.
While eating the dessert.
Manyata: Thank you so much for this.
Uday for what? The dessert?
He said laughing a little.
Manyata: No idiot, for the date.
Uday: Thank you for agreeing to come.
Manyata: Well I din't agree. I just had to.
She said laughing a little.
Uday: come on we both know ki agar tum nahi aana chahti toh koi tumhe force nahi kar sakta.
Manyata: That's true. But seriously after I think I should give us a chance. You are not that bad afterall.
She said smilling.
Uday got up from his chair and asked Manyata for a dance. She agreed
There was no music or a song, just a violen playing in the background.
He put both his hands on her waist and she put both her hands around his neck and they just swirled with the tunes. It felt to both of them as if they are in a very peaceful situation.
Manyata slowly unconsciously placed her head on his chest and he placed his head on her head.
As Manyata's trail of thoughts broke and she came to reality she realised what position they were in. She immediately pulled herself back.
Manyata: I am so sorry. I didn't realise. I am sorry
She started to ove but Uday held her hand and pulled her towards himself that her back collided with his chest. He whispered in her ear.
Uday: I know is baat ke liye abhi bahut jaldi hai. I know all of this started as you doing it just because raj convinced you. Par yeh toh tum bhi manti ho na ki hamare beech kuch aisa hai jo baar baar hum dono ko door jaane nahi de rha. I'll now lie to you Manyata. i like you. I really do. Aur agar main logo ko padhne ki thodi si bhi khubi rakhta hun toh main yeh keh sakti hun ki you like me too. Don't deny it. We have something between us that peple rarely find. I don't know what this feeling is. But I know I want to explore it.
He loosened his grip on her hand and as soon as that happened she ran from there.

Precap: Preperations for Raj And Aditi's wedding start and more Manveer love scenes 😉
Thank you for waiting everyone.
Next chapter after 16 likes.
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