A Hate- Love Story: Ch-15 pg- 56 (Updated 27/11/16) - Page 31

Humairaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: nityatandon

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#FF0000" size="3">Alisha dear there are still 2 likes to go 😭.</font>

😭 waiting

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cuteariya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#302

nitya when u gonna update?

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: cuteariya
nitya when u gonna update?

Hi. I want to update too. But it has not reached 16 likes yet. I'm helpless too.

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hi. I want to update too. But it has not reached 16 likes yet. I'm helpless too.

No Dii There R 16 Likes... 😊

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal

No Dii There R 16 Likes... 😊

Thank you for telling Alisha. I just noticed. When I checked this morning it was 14. So I thought it still would be the same. I'll update tomorrow for sure.

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Thank you for telling Alisha. I just noticed. When I checked this morning it was 14. So I thought it still would be the same. I'll update tomorrow for sure.

ohh thats Alright... U dont need to say about it... i too check my story in morning in evening and in night that did likes increased or not...

it happens...

and thank u ... 😊 so atlast after a long time we would get an update... 😊 Yipeee...😃😆

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#307

Heyyy sis u had said that today u would update but no update... 😔

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal
Heyyy sis u had said that today u would update but no update... 😔

Yes Alisha I know. And I'm so sorry about that. But I had written the episode and I dont know where I saved it. And now I'm not able to find it. Don't worry I'll try to find it today and if I cannot I will write it again and updaye by tonight.

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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A big thank you to these 16 people who likes the previous chapter

maaneet786, Sunsnow, munia.ash2015, Paridi1234, wqadf, ekra101, simi.k., alisha_ashiyal, humairaa1, Karkit, sanah12, Priya46, preya_radev, Asyalover, cuteariya, sanghita0000,

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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CHAPTER 12

The next day the practice was cancelled ecause the teacher was absent. So all of them went to the Raj Mahal.

At the Raj Mahal

Vijay: Aaj toh sab wapas aa rahe hai na.
Manyata: Haan Vijay bhai humse toh wait hi nhi ho rha dada se milne ke liye.
J: Par aapse bhi zyada excited hai koi yaha pe.
Everybody looks at Aditi and she blushes.
J: Toh ab kya karein.
Karan: Film dekhte hai.
Uday: Par kaunsi?
Unnati, J and Manyata look at each other and say together: DDLJ
Vijay: Ohh nahi nahi please. Kitni baar dekh chuke hai
Uday: Toh horror film dekhe.
Karan (pats his shoulder): Thats my buddy. Horror film dekhte hai.
Manyata: Yeah sounds good to me.
J: Nahi nahi horror film nahi
Vijay: Kyu J bhai tumhe darr lag rha hai
J: Aisa kuch nhi hai. Hum toh Unnati ke liye bol rahe the. Use darr lagta hai.
Uday: Unnati hamari behen hai J. Woh kisi cheej se nahi darti. Kyu Unnati?
Unnati: Haan dada. J kuch nhi hoga tum kyu darr rhi ho.
Jagat: J tum mat daro. Hum hai na.
J smiles at him.
They sit on the couch to watch the film
Order: Jagat, J, Aditi, Raj, Manyata, Uday, Unnati, VIjay
During the film J was constantly holding Jagat's hand. And once in a scene Manyata accidently put her face on Uday's shoulder. Uday was looking at Manyata the whole time. If anybody was to ask him about the film he would be completely blank.
After the film finished they were talking
J: Abhi bhi time baki hai. Ab kya kare?
Unnati: Truth and Dare khele.
Manyata: Yes. Amazing. Yeh khelte hai.
Suddenly Aditi's phone rang.
She talked and return
Aditi: Tumhe akele khelna padega. Meri friend ka accident ho gaya hai. Zyada critical nhi hai par uske parents yaha nhi hai toh mujhe jana padega.
She goes and they sit down in a circle to play.
It was Unnati's turn first.
J: Truth or dare?
Unnati: Umm... Truth
J; Okay. Kuch aisa batao jo tumne kiya ho jo bahut gross ho.
Unnati: Bachpan mein main ek baar apni friend ke ghar gayi thi and uski mom ne mujhe kuch mithai di thi khane ko. Maine thodi si khaipar mujhe achi nahi lagi tho maine usi box mein spit kardi.
Vijay: Eww.
Everybody laugh at that.
They spin the bottle again and it is J's turn this time.
J: I choose dare.
Karan: Okay. Kiss jagat
J: what?
Karan: Kiss jaggat.
J: Okay.
They both stand up and kiss each other.
J; khush
they spin the bottle again and this time it is Uday.
Uday: Dare.
Unnati: Dada aap bahut acha gaate hai. Please sing na.
Uday: Okay.

Precap: Uday sings
Raj returns.

Thats all people.
Next update after 16 likes.
I know there wasn't much of Manveer but next update will surely have it.

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