ff:forever & always Part 64 pg 123 (19/06/2017) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Very interesting. Pls pm me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow thanks for the big response guys i never expected so many ppl to actually like the character sketch now im really nervous to update the first part oh god help me i will update soon and thanks to those who tried to help to suggest a name for this ff. and yes i will send pm to those who want me to
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok guys ive been give some names by luvuday,princess_T and maneta so i would like you guys to vote which one you all would like and the one that has more votes will be chosen
-tu hi mera
-jannat
-rab rakha
-main hoon na
-teri ishq mein meri jaan fanna ho jai
-tum se hi
-yahi hota pyar hai
-yaa rabba
-yeh ishq hai

The Royalty in these Royals

PYAAR KII EK KAHANI
MOHABATEIN
PYAAR ISHQ AUR MOHABAT
BEYOND LOVE
KAHAANI
DANGEROUS ISHQ
HUMKO TUMSE PYAAR HAI
DIL NE JISE APNA KAHA
THODA SA PYAAR HUA HAI THODA HAI BAAKI
JUNOON
JANEEMAN
I LOVE U
ISHQ YA DHOKA
HUM AAP KE DIL MAIN REHTE HAIN KAHIN PYAAR NA HO JAYE
KITNI MOHABAAT HAI
HEMARA DIL AAPKE PASS HAI
ISHQZAADE
KAMBAKHT ISHQ
ISHQIYA
TU MERE HO
OBSESSION
EK MAIN AUR EKK TU
CHAAHAT


and also i have sent buddy request to those who wanted pm so please accept the buddy request i have sent thank you
Edited by preya_radev - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
#14
im suggesting some name
FANAA - A DARK LUV STORY
PYAAR KII EK KAHANI
MOHABATEIN
PYAAR ISHQ AUR MOHABAT
BEYOND LOVE
KAHAANI
DANGEROUS ISHQ
HUMKO TUMSE PYAAR HAI
DIL NE JISE APNA KAHA
THODA SA PYAAR HUA HAI THODA HAI BAAKI
JUNOON
JANEEMAN
I LOVE U
ISHQ YA DHOKA
HUM AAP KE DIL MAIN REHTE HAIN KAHIN PYAAR NA HO JAYE
PLS PREYA PM ME WHEN U UPDATE
Posted: 12 years ago
#15
KITNI MOHABAAT HAI
HEMARA DIL AAPKE PASS HAI
ISHQZAADE
KAMBAKHT ISHQ
ISHQIYA
TU MERE HO
OBSESSION
EK MAIN AUR EKK TU
CHAAHAT
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Ok guys here is part one hope u like it and please be honest with your replies

8:00am at the devgardh palace you can see Rajmata Mrinalini Devi sitting in her office speaking on the phone. (I'm gone put rajmata names as DS when she speak it will be a lot easier for me)

DS: thank you Commissioner Saab for your help and please do come to the party organised this Saturday if possible bye.

Doctor Saab: Rajmata ji aaj app bohaut khush lag rahin hain (rajmata ji today you seem to be so happy)

DS had this big smile on her face: Doctor Saab how can I not be happy when my grandchildren (manyata and also unnati) are coming back after 3 years especially uday I haven't seen him after he left for his further studies. Doctor Saab smiled at that and komal walked in listening to the convo

Komal: maa Saab you are absolutely right and after a long time jaigarh and devgardh kids will be seen together and I'm happy how jay and Vijay decided to organise a party for manyata, uday and unnati return.

DS: haan komal you are right they all will be seen together I still remember that time when uday, manyata and unnati were kids and later on when uday had to go London for his further studies did you see how manyata was crying seeing him leave. Komal smiled and had tears in her eyes. Just then a servant comes in to call them for breakfast.

At the dining table, manika and komal were talking generally.

Jay: DS these are the things that we are going to have in the party she said handing the list to DS who was looking at it carefully. Just then Vijay bhai came.

Vijay: nani Saab these are the list of the guest that has been invited from our side and girirag uncle side he said handing it to her. DS was impressed how her other two grandchildren were trying to make the party superb by working hard on it. Vijay sat down and was about to have his breakfast when he saw the person walking towards the breakfast table''''''.

Ok guys I end the first part here lol hmm well I have started to write the second part and may update it later on depends on how much likes and comments I get lol hope you like it and don't forget to press the like button and do leave a comment. Well I think I might be able to update part 2 today lets see

Edited by preya_radev - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

sounds 2 b interesting...plz cont 😊 waiting 4 nxt update

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
nice plot dear,👏
please do longer update next time.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Itz really nyc update and thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Awesome start 👍🏼...really nice plot...update the next part soon...and make it a little longer if u cn...plzz...and can u pm me as well?? 😊
On name suggestions i would like to vote for
Tu hi mera
Tum se hi
Thoda sa pyaar hua h thoda h baki
Dil ne jise apna kaha
Kahi pyaar na ho jaye
Ek main aur ek tu
Main Hoon Na

hey i wanna suggest some name as well...bt i guess since the voting is already going on...so 😕
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