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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

Abhimanyu sitting in his office thinking about what happened eariler.
Falshback
Tejali and abhimanyu were fighting some goons when one of them attacks on tejali and her hand gets hurt realyl badly and it starts to bleed. abhi sees this and hits that person, he fights all of them and they run away.
Tejali is standing by the car and holding her hand which is bleeding and paining, she ignores it all and starts to walk off when abhimanyu sees this and is suprised.
Abhimanyu: Tejali u r hurt, haath se khoon beh raha hai.
Tejali turns around and says:
mujhe Aadat hogayi hai es sabki ab dard nahi hota, behne do khoon ko.
and walks off, abhimanyu is shocked to hear this. He walks upto her and start to say something but tejali turns to the car door and was about to open it. Abhi this time holds her by arm and turn her around and holds her hand but tejali frees her hand abhi again holds her hand tightly making her sigh in pain ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ.
Abhimanyu with other hand takes out his handkerchief and styarts to tie on her hand, tejali feels her tears are forming in her eyes, but not because of the pain but due to abhi's affection ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ Abhimnayu ties handkerchief on her hand and sees that tears rolling down her cheeks. abhi moves his hand and is about to wipe her tears, but tejali with her hand wipes them off and looks away. Abhi feels a lil disappointment

Abihmanyu: jab dard bardasht nahi hota toh kyon itna bardasht karti ho? nikla do sab dard, sab ansooyon ko, dil ka sara gubaar nikla do bahar, takay dil mein kuch na rahe.

his words making her weak, making her cry but she thought to be strong and not break down. Tejali palying stong tries to move away but away put his both hands on both side of her blocking her way, he stands there with few incheces gap between them.

Abhimanyu: main janta hon tum bohut dukhi ho yeh natak mere samne mat karo, apne app ko kyon saza de rahi ho, en ansooyon ko ruk kar?

this time tears could not be held longer and they start to roll down or rather fall like rain. Tejali starts to cry uncontrolbly ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ, in sobs she tries to say something but couldn't and just cries, abhiamnyu's heart is aching listeing to her wails, seeing tears running from her eyes like rain. ๐Ÿ˜ญ
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abhimanyu put his hand on her cheek and moves his other hand down to her waist and slightly slips his hand behind her waist and holds her waistโ˜บ๏ธ. while pats her cheek with other hand, tejali could not bear longer and holds him tightly from his shirt and hugs him tightly ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰ and cries more. abhimanyu colud sense how much she is hurt by the way she was holding his shirt tightly and digging her nails into his chest ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ.
after a while standing like this and crying tejali suddenly senses what was happeing, she quickly moves her face upto his nd looks at him in shock. Abhi is alos confused, tejali pushes him away hardly and runs from there, leaving abhimanyu in shock.
Flashback ends

Will continue this later ๐Ÿ˜ณ do comment guyz please ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Abhimanyu's face glew remembering what happened but was also lil confused of Tejali's reaction. Abhimanyu thinking "main janta hon tejali bohut upset hai abhi aur usay kisike saath ki zarooraat hai, par yeh ladki bhi na.... kuch dinon pehle main samajh nahi pah raha tha ke akhir kya rishta hai hum dono ka? ajj ehsaas howa ke jo bhi hai dosti se badh kar hai ๐Ÿ˜ณ ajj ehsaas howa ke haan yeh dosti se badhkar pyaar hi hai๐Ÿ˜ณ. I love her....haan yehi pyaar hai, chot usko lagi toh dard mujhe howa, ajj tak woh mujhe janne ke bahene dhondti rahi aur ab main uske kareeb janne ke liye..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ" he remembers when he touched her, when he held her from waist, he blushes ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ.

Abhimanyu picks up the phone and dials tejali's no. then disconnects it, then again dial it and disconnects it. for the 3rd time he finally dials it and doesn't disconnets this time๐Ÿ˜†. bell is ringing but tejali is not picknig up the phone, here abhimanyu is getting anxiuos...finally tejali picks up the phone..

gotta go now will continue later๐Ÿ˜ณ bye...and do comment

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Fazila~

wah wah wah!!!!!!!!!! pravina aur pravin yaad aagayaaaaaa.......i dont know this couple, but ur ffs fab ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

tyhanx fazi๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 16 years ago
Great workn once again sweety ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago










๐Ÿค—





This is based on Abhimanyu and Tejali!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
This will be written by me and was Inspired by Ikra ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜Š










He is a Hard working officer from CID Special Bureau, he can get very serious at times specially when it comes to work!!



She is a hard working officer from CID Special Bureau, she is best friends with Jasmine. She is in love with Abhimanyu. ๐Ÿ˜‰





She is a cute and charming girl and is a younger sister of Tejali, she is Girlfriend to Arjun and is madly in love with him. She goes to college.





He is smart and tricky person, he is boyfriend to Tina, he goes to the same college as Tina.



These are all the officers so far in CID Special Bureau



These are all the officers so far in CID





**Please Tell Me if i should continue or not, because there's no point if anyone doesn't like it!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Please tell me how to improve or any ideas on what to do to keep you all engaged in reading. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Thank you so much**




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Posted: 16 years ago



It starts when Abhimanyu and Tejali are at a candlelight dinner. Tejali is wearing a red dress, matching jewellery and a red handbag (Abhi gifted her all this). Abhi is wearing black suit with a white shirt. The scenery is: no- one around except from them two, very quiet, lake near by, night. On the table white long candles- lit up (in the middle), beautifully set by Abhi. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Tejali asks: "Abhi, why did you choose this place for our lovely candlelight dinner?"
Abhi: "Wellโ€ฆ no- one aroundโ€ฆ only us twoโ€ฆ alone!! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Alarm goes off!! 6:30am
Tejali woke upโ€ฆ

Teji: "Sapna tha ๐Ÿ˜ญ โ€ฆ kash sach hota" ๐Ÿ˜ณ

She gets up, get washed and dressed and is about leave the house. Someone rings the doorbell

Teji says to herself: "is waqt pe kaun aya"

She opens the door.
"Delivery for Miss Tejali!"
She gets a gift box and flowers (different coloured roses) ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Teji: "Ye Kisne Behja"
Delivery person: "Putaa nahi madam"
Teji: "Theek hai, ji Shukriya" ๐Ÿ˜Š

Inside she get a beautiful, expensive jewellery set, a cute small teddy bear and chocolates.
There's a card saying:


Dearest Tejali

Many Happy Returns of the day!!
May all your wishes come true and God Bless You
Happy Birthday

Lots of Love Fromโ€ฆ. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰


She says to herself: "Har saal koi mujhe birthday card aur gift behjata hai, par who naam kyun nahi likhta."

She put it nicely in her room and leaves the house, smiling to herself. She goes to the bureau.


At the Bureau, there is only Jasmine and Samar
Tejali: "Where is everyone"
Jasmine: " Acp sir Akshay sir aur Pratap, jungle mein gaye hai"
Tejali: "Kyun"
Samar: " Ek case aya, ke kuch log jo jungle mein jate hai aur gayab hojate hai"
Tejali: "Aur Abhimanyu"
Jasmine and Samar both look at each other and smile. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Jasmine: "Putaa Nahi, woh aye hai nahi aaj."

This was just a starting to see how it was ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Hope you liked it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Please do comment
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: payal_r











๐Ÿค—





This is based on Abhimanyu and Tejali!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
This will be written by me and was Inspired by Ikra ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜Š










He is a Hard working officer from CID Special Bureau, he can get very serious at times specially when it comes to work!!



She is a hard working officer from CID Special Bureau, she is best friends with Jasmine. She is in love with Abhimanyu. ๐Ÿ˜‰





She is a cute and charming girl and is a younger sister of Tejali, she is Girlfriend to Arjun and is madly in love with him. She goes to college.





He is smart and tricky person, he is boyfriend to Tina, he goes to the same college as Tina.



These are all the officers so far in CID Special Bureau



These are all the officers so far in CID





**Please Tell Me if i should continue or not, because there's no point if anyone doesn't like it!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Please tell me how to improve or any ideas on what to do to keep you all engaged in reading. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Thank you so much**




OMG... U R A โญ๏ธ....

Brilliant work๐Ÿ‘This sounds really interesting๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Payal u made me nite yaar๐Ÿ˜ณ ab toh raat bhar enke sapne ayenige๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

And dont dare stop, keep writing, warna baat nahi karongi๐Ÿ˜ณ JK๐Ÿ˜† please keep writing, I 'm looking forward to read it๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: payal_r




It starts when Abhimanyu and Tejali are at a candlelight dinner. Tejali is wearing a red dress, matching jewellery and a red handbag (Abhi gifted her all this). Abhi is wearing black suit with a white shirt. The scenery is: no- one around except from them two, very quiet, lake near by, night. On the table white long candles- lit up (in the middle), beautifully set by Abhi. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Tejali asks: "Abhi, why did you choose this place for our lovely candlelight dinner?"
Abhi: "Wellโ€ฆ no- one aroundโ€ฆ only us twoโ€ฆ alone!! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Alarm goes off!! 6:30am
Tejali woke upโ€ฆ

Teji: "Sapna tha ๐Ÿ˜ญ โ€ฆ kash sach hota" ๐Ÿ˜ณ

She gets up, get washed and dressed and is about leave the house. Someone rings the doorbell

Teji says to herself: "is waqt pe kaun aya"

She opens the door.
"Delivery for Miss Tejali!"
She gets a gift box and flowers (different coloured roses) ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Teji: "Ye Kisne Behja"
Delivery person: "Putaa nahi madam"
Teji: "Theek hai, ji Shukriya" ๐Ÿ˜Š

Inside she get a beautiful, expensive jewellery set, a cute small teddy bear and chocolates.
There's a card saying:


Dearest Tejali

Many Happy Returns of the day!!
May all your wishes come true and God Bless You
Happy Birthday

Lots of Love Fromโ€ฆ. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰


She says to herself: "Har saal koi mujhe birthday card aur gift behjata hai, par who naam kyun nahi likhta."

She put it nicely in her room and leaves the house, smiling to herself. She goes to the bureau.


At the Bureau, there is only Jasmine and Samar
Tejali: "Where is everyone"
Jasmine: " Acp sir Akshay sir aur Pratap, jungle mein gaye hai"
Tejali: "Kyun"
Samar: " Ek case aya, ke kuch log jo jungle mein jate hai aur gayab hojate hai"
Tejali: "Aur Abhimanyu"
Jasmine and Samar both look at each other and smile. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Jasmine: "Putaa Nahi, woh aye hai nahi aaj."

This was just a starting to see how it was ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Hope you liked it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Please do comment

fantastic Start๐Ÿ‘, this is great work....please continu soon, I'm already loving itโ˜บ๏ธ

now i'll dream about both of them๐Ÿ˜

Payal do continue please๐Ÿ˜ƒ u r doing great job..

waise meri insiration kaam kar rahi hai lagta hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: payal_r




It starts when Abhimanyu and Tejali are at a candlelight dinner. Tejali is wearing a red dress, matching jewellery and a red handbag (Abhi gifted her all this). Abhi is wearing black suit with a white shirt. The scenery is: no- one around except from them two, very quiet, lake near by, night. On the table white long candles- lit up (in the middle), beautifully set by Abhi. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Tejali asks: "Abhi, why did you choose this place for our lovely candlelight dinner?"
Abhi: "Wellโ€ฆ no- one aroundโ€ฆ only us twoโ€ฆ alone!! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Alarm goes off!! 6:30am
Tejali woke upโ€ฆ

Teji: "Sapna tha ๐Ÿ˜ญ โ€ฆ kash sach hota" ๐Ÿ˜ณ

She gets up, get washed and dressed and is about leave the house. Someone rings the doorbell

Teji says to herself: "is waqt pe kaun aya"

She opens the door.
"Delivery for Miss Tejali!"
She gets a gift box and flowers (different coloured roses) ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Teji: "Ye Kisne Behja"
Delivery person: "Putaa nahi madam"
Teji: "Theek hai, ji Shukriya" ๐Ÿ˜Š

Inside she get a beautiful, expensive jewellery set, a cute small teddy bear and chocolates.
There's a card saying:


Dearest Tejali

Many Happy Returns of the day!!
May all your wishes come true and God Bless You
Happy Birthday

Lots of Love Fromโ€ฆ. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰


She says to herself: "Har saal koi mujhe birthday card aur gift behjata hai, par who naam kyun nahi likhta."

She put it nicely in her room and leaves the house, smiling to herself. She goes to the bureau.


At the Bureau, there is only Jasmine and Samar
Tejali: "Where is everyone"
Jasmine: " Acp sir Akshay sir aur Pratap, jungle mein gaye hai"
Tejali: "Kyun"
Samar: " Ek case aya, ke kuch log jo jungle mein jate hai aur gayab hojate hai"
Tejali: "Aur Abhimanyu"
Jasmine and Samar both look at each other and smile. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Jasmine: "Putaa Nahi, woh aye hai nahi aaj."

This was just a starting to see how it was ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Hope you liked it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Please do comment

Payal!!..this is awsome awsome awsome!!

i love it!..please do continue๐Ÿ˜ƒ..

waiting to see some more..

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thankyou so much for the comments guys..... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
glad to see you like it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
next update should be before sunday or on ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer


Flashback ends

Will continue this later ๐Ÿ˜ณ do comment guyz please ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Abhimanyu's face glew remembering what happened but was also lil confused of Tejali's reaction. Abhimanyu thinking "main janta hon tejali bohut upset hai abhi aur usay kisike saath ki zarooraat hai, par yeh ladki bhi na.... kuch dinon pehle main samajh nahi pah raha tha ke akhir kya rishta hai hum dono ka? ajj ehsaas howa ke jo bhi hai dosti se badh kar hai ๐Ÿ˜ณ ajj ehsaas howa ke haan yeh dosti se badhkar pyaar hi hai๐Ÿ˜ณ. I love her....haan yehi pyaar hai, chot usko lagi toh dard mujhe howa, ajj tak woh mujhe janne ke bahene dhondti rahi aur ab main uske kareeb janne ke liye..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ" he remembers when he touched her, when he held her from waist, he blushes ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ.

Abhimanyu picks up the phone and dials tejali's no. then disconnects it, then again dial it and disconnects it. for the 3rd time he finally dials it and doesn't disconnets this time๐Ÿ˜†. bell is ringing but tejali is not picknig up the phone, here abhimanyu is getting anxiuos...finally tejali picks up the phone..

gotta go now will continue later๐Ÿ˜ณ bye...and do comment

wah wah wah! maza aagaya....ddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!! conti yaaar......ab satayoo mat....jaldiiiii complete karoooo...........๐Ÿ˜ณ
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