DIYA & GD (C I P)...! (Last Part added @ PG 1) - Page 3

misbah93

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

wow the joint adventure is too good itne din baad kuch acha parh kar boht maza aya

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gadhadada

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: duoa
Superb as always 👏
Loved the investigation so faar
Waiting eagerly for the next parts
Your narration is excellent i actually feel that i am watching it on screen 👏

Yeah, its DIYA Magic Baccha...😳👏

She really Portrayed Everything like a Portrayal of Motion Picture...👏👏

Thank you for Loving the narration and Investigation so far...😃😃

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gadhadada

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: dreamfanatic
Oh...😲
Dada bhi abh cliffhanger per end Karne lage hain...😉
Yaar your and DIYA writing settle perfectly together...👏😳
It's amazing to read it...👏
But I am confused with APP membership...
After filling all details kya log member nahi ban pate?
Or Membership is next stage in app?
Ooo...The prodigal criminal friend returns...😛
RIFFI kahan hai..?😆😛
Still no review...😈

ab kya karein...

BUNNI ka Asar ho gaya hy na...😉😉

its a Big Compliment Baccha although I still find Myself at First Step...😳👏👏

Yeah, after Reading This Chappy...

U could easily Understand whats inside BOTH PARROTS Devil Seengs...😈😎

Riffi...

haq haaa...

usy SEM (SAMOSA EATING MAN) nay Sammohit kr diya hy...😉😉

Hope Jaldi bahar aa jaye...😆😆

Thank you so very much BUNNI...😳👏

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gadhadada

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: misbah93
wow the joint adventure is too good itne din baad kuch acha parh kar boht maza aya

Wow...😳

Big Compliment...👏👏

big Thank you so much...😳👏

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Shilpam56

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Yet another interesting chapter,
N this time added spices of cliff hanger,
Even though few places there is doubt,
But lets see in coming chapter. 😊

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saba yaqoob

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

OMG 😲

Eagerly waiting for the next part
Baaki baatein next part parh k
😉

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misbah93

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

very nice intresting story Thank you so much for sharing your new investigating story after a long gap...

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Sujata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Vry interesting story dada

Kash cid me aise interesting story dikhaya jata

App k thru crime...ye to kamal hai...waise v ek case aisa samne to aya hai...par uss aap me koi detail nhi hai...or convo k bckups nhi hota, to police ko ip address nhi mile.

Nywys...aap ne kamal hi kar dia dada...bs jaldi se nxt updt kardo...intetesting time me end kar dia...cliff hngr pe latka dia by God...ab latke raho...pata nhi kitne dino tak aise rehna parega

Jaldi updt karo...jaldi seee

Thnx 4 pm

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Riya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Oh this time I am little confused as what was 3rd part..😆

I read it earlier only but read again today...😛

End was surprising...😲

Baaki baadme...😆

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gadhadada

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Shilpam56
Yet another interesting chapter,
N this time added spices of cliff hanger,
Even though few places there is doubt,
But lets see in coming chapter. 😊

Yeah...😆

trying Added Spice Only as Dish already Cooked by Diya Herself...⭐️⭐️

regarding Doubts, Hope De-solved in this Chapter...😉

Thank you so much for finding it Interesting...😳👏

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