My Story Collection : By Visrom - Page 4

The scene at the hotel where acp meets daya sir and the safety of rest of the team was revealed was very nice to read. ACP's emotions after the blast were wonderful.

The first and the chase at the end were my favourite.

I've read a few other stories of yours and will read more. I really like your investigative stories. 😊

I wish I had some good story for every disaster that we see on screen, though I know that's not possible.😆

Well, I'm half way through another story of yours. I'll be here soon with the fb.

The first two stories were soo sweet. Especially the first one was different from what u usually write but still it was very sweet. However I was not expecting the story to end so soon and wanted to read more. I hope there will be a PART-II. 😉

The jaywanti story was not really very entertaining as it made me remember the numerous episodes where the story made me and 😡. plus, I personally don't like her character as an officer.

But then again I would say...I would love to read a part2 of 'the irthday cake'.😃

thanks Diya.😃

The Jaywanti story was written as part of a contest. A very irritating challenge given to my team by the opposite team

They said it HAS to be a YSPT story with Jaywanti...I HATED writing it but I had to...😔

In that case, it was an applausable effort.👏

Awesome story Vis di👏

Updated my collection. 😳