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Shattered and lost he walked amidst the crowd of strangers. It's been two years since he smiled or was seen happy. Last when he smiled was on her birth day. Since she left, his life's happiness and light has been snatched away from him and he was pushed into a dark evil valley where one sees different forms of cruelty. He was confused and is still confused on the way life has slapped him. He cursed himself for being the less fortunate and wished her life's all happiness. She left or fate took her away. There wasn't a single person who knew where his wife was. He digs himself deeper and deeper into solitude and found solace in her memories.

He, Kabir Jaiswal for the world was a tough rich handsome business man, but inside he was a shattered lost soul. Two years before he went for a business meeting outside the nation, his return journey marked an unforgettable day in his life. Each step he took that laid back a mark of remembrance. He opened the doors of his house expecting to see his wife jump in with joy seeing him. But all he saw was total isolation and endless silence.

There was no one to receive him, all deserted and lonely. No one was around. A note near the table said him where his family went. A sigh of relief he gave but then suddenly his eyes fell on the bottom line of the note "Aditi will be there".

So Aditi hasn't gone with rest of them, so where is she, he wondered. The whole house he swept in but all searches went in vain. He couldn't find her. May be she went outside he thought. Hours and hours he consoled himself, finally when he lost his patience he left in search of her. Whole day of tiresome made me worn out and weak. He felt could no more make a step forward. So he subdued himself and since then never did he come out.

Now two years passed by, he was living his life like a machine does, his tears dried up and emotions evaporated but somewhere deep in his heart lays a feeble hope of meeting his beloved. Closing all doors of his heart he masked a face of coldness and walks around with an air of aristocratic pride not letting people like him or appreciates him.

His world was Aditi but she is no more with him, his world is no more with him and he is no more there for himself.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is beautiful. Seems so sad though. Hope to see happy moments later. 👏
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good nice start but it has such sad feeling !!😳
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nice start... thnk it's gonna be a thriller.. post the next part soon..
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Originally posted by: -mimi-

nice start... thnk it's gonna be a thriller.. post the next part soon..


yea!! i m plannin on a thriller kinda story😳
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sab ke sab res karke kaha gayab ho gayi?
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nice intro
plz update soon
pm me whenever u update😳
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Hey nice start...eager to know what will happen next...pls pm me too.
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Chapter 1

12/06/2012

Daulganj

The whole city was in a festive mood, tourists from different parts of the nation gathered in this small town, world was to witness an opening of a unique opening of a hotel by the Jaiswal group. Everyone were curious as the never seen palace in Daulganj is been taken by the Jaiswal group. A five star hotel in this small town was the major talk of the town. Locals were happy as news coverage was done and people peeped into the camera with hope to be captured in television. Schools and colleges were closed and students queued up outside the palace. Tomorrow the epical ceremony would take place, and today first time ever the palace will be opened for commoners. They could come and have a look around the forbidden palace of Daulganj. This excited all young minds and curious souls of the town. Nearby town and city dwellers too piled up outside the palace and first time in history Daulganj was in the limelight.

News reporters and other media focused their attention on the achievement of this young business man Kabir Jaiswal. Kabir on the other hand unaware of the rising interest in public about him isolated himself from the maddening crowd.

Palace

"Wow, this place is so huge" a young lady exclaimed.

"This place has been closed since ages" her friend added "I wonder why"

"Hey girls, look at this, magnificent portraits of Raja's and Rani's"

"Come on, move fast" another girl said pushing her friends.

Bunch of girls from Delhi made their way to Daulganj to see the palace. All giggling and blabbering walked aimlessly in the palace. Not knowing what else to do, they broke into a group of two and walked forward in different directions. Each decided to sweep off the palace as this first and last opportunity was a gift.

Two of them remained in the room of portraits, each exquisitely beautiful portraits hanging and adorning the wall. So unique and beautiful they are. Each carried them to a world of magical beauty. Stopping by each portrait they enjoyed its style and beauty and moved ahead. One step further and the girl yelled "it's you, Neha, YOUR PORTRAIT"

Edited by sarah_kelly - 12 years ago
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wow..gayu...loved it..esp the end..

interesting..and exciting..!! continue soon..

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