One word Awesome...👏
Cant imagine Swayam giving cold shoulder to Sharon...but liked the part where she ask" Where do i sleep?"to his reply...😉" Couch, bathtub, floor - pick your favourite...😆But 1 thng for sure Shekhawats will b a tough shell for her...
Originally posted by: sneharay
Nice update.. 👍🏼
please give more swaron moments..
Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Neha is assigned to sharon...
Oh god..
What a weird family...
I am loving sharon here..
She put up a small fight...
Nice..
Hope tasha get along soon..
Sharon love you girl...
Update soon
Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
"Where do I sleep then?" Sharon asked.
"Couch, bathtub, floor - pick your favorite," 🤣
This one is my fav moment. I was so cracked up looking at Swayam's indifference with which he said this. 🤣
The situation must be so wierd for Sharon. I mean even in my imaginations it just gets wierd to wierder.
The way she is being treated in the Shekhawat house leaves me Speechless in a shocking way. Every encounter, every conversation so materialistic, flaunting arrogance and power in an uncanny way -_-
Where Swayam goes all aggressive at Vicky I was like Whoa! What just happened? Got a soft Swayam inside you? And then he explained it to her, 'MY WIFE!'
All the delusions of Sharon and mine went poof and I think we both landed on earth!!!
And the last conversation of them in room, I dont know why but his indifference to Sharon makes me laugh at him maybe because I really dont know if he was for real and I would have been in place of Sharon, how on earth I would deal with him! Its unconvienent for him to sleep in Guest room. Right! [((]
I hope Taani gives her a chance because she is the only real person she has got in that house, as of now!
And dude Swayam Shekhawat is getting on my nerves already and given my love for him thats saying something! Kudos to your writing on his and Shekhawat's charcterisation B|
Chitra :)
Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya
Reserved coz I have quite a bit to say!😊
*Unreserve*Okay I know I have already said it twice but I am going to say it again that the flow is just impeccable. I love the way how one thing is leading to another so perfectly and its adding so much to the already appealing plot .I really can't buy that this is your first FF! Brilliant work there:)Moving on to the update, you potrayed Sharon so well here, her anxieties thinking about how she's going to survive in the alien family she's now become a part of is written so aptly.Looking at Anjali's behavior I feel my perception about her was somewhat right. Although her actions are only aimed towards making Sharon familiar of the so called luxurious lifestyle she's gonna be living now ,there was a tinge of sweetness I felt. I don't find Anjali fake,she's just gotten herself adapted to this materialistic world to such a great extent that now the real feelings and emotions don't mean much to her.Taani is still grey for me. She does seem a bit real and different from the weird family but still I couldn't understand her coldness towards Sharon considering that she does seem the most sensible one of the lot,as of now atleast. I have a feeling there's a reason for it,but lets put my imaginations to rest."You are my wife "What was that? As much as Swayam was totally unbelievable here, I couldn't help but get a bad feeling about Vicky. What was Swayam hinting exactly with that possessive claim is unknown yet ,but I feel it was more for Vicky then Sharon.😲The little conversation between Swayam and Sharon was interesting here. Swayam is becoming annoying but then I kind of liked the carefree attitude. Atleast there is no tension or ultimate hatred between them for starters."Couch, bathtub, floor - pick your favorite,"This line was lol!! 🤣 He was really mean here,but then I couldn't help but laugh. He was weirdly funny(if that even makes sense :P. Sharon sulking and cursing him is totally understood !To top it on ,planning for the grand party is going to be a tough task looking at the amount of stuff she's got to take care of!If first day was like this, I wonder what the rest are going to be like!..Looking forward to some more adventures in Sharon's life with the mad family.Also Swayam needs to come in the spotlight now,I'm sure there's lots to explore in there.Superb work !! 👍🏼 :)Update super soon and PM me please:)Love,Shreya
Originally posted by: SHAhira-Swaron
Im jst glued wid ur stry.the use f wrds the way u potray der emotions der pov its jst blows my mind idk hw sharon is gng to live correction survive n dis famly i wnt to knw swayam pov nd d lst prt ws d highlight "couch bathtub floor pck ur fav" lol upd sn
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