Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya
Reserved.
*Unreserve*I am feeling soo soo bad for Sharon! ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ Needless to say Swayam is going to have to make up by doing something really unbelievably outstanding now to have me (and Sharon ofcourse) change my mind about him. 😡I think the problem with Swayam has gone beyond trust issues. He's becoming a hollow person in the process of trying to be an overprotective brother. Humiliating Rey for no damn reason instead of confronting his own sister was not only immature but also a failed attempt at trying to establish his superiority. He should be knowing that his wife doesn't tolerate non-sense and she will get back at him. But now not only has he lost her respect but has also broken her heart.A part of me broke to see Sharon's moment of confession being ruined so badly. What they were beginning to share was so beautiful ,it's becoming really hard to believe Swayam could stoop so low and not think about her even once while doing all of this. I am really really curious to know what had gotten into him that caused him to ruin something so beautiful. He fell for Sharon quite before she did so he better have a justification for his insensitive behaviour. 😡Sharon is having a really tough time dealing with her dad, father and now her college as well. She's probably paying a price for playing the understanding one for too long. I really want Swayam to appreciate every single time Sharon has tolerated his impulsive and selfish behaviour when he'll eventually regain his sanity, cuz definitely at the moment he seems to have lost it.Really really waiting for next one, especially because I am not able to understand Swayam now. He likes and knows Sharon enough to understand that she would be the victim of his actions yet he chose to go ahead with it. That little moment in the office where Sharon fainted does give a hint he still cares for her. Although at present all of it seems fake. Despite her begging he didn't give in. He's been unbelievable here really. Hopefully we'll know something in future that would justify his actions to some extent.As always I am hooked!!Please give an update sooner this time!-Shreya <3
Originally posted by: SHAhira-Swaron
Sorry For the RES again
Pheww going to unress first sorry for unressing so late i have been trying to review since three days but now got a little time and now coming to the updateAm still in trance and getting it all in my mind with all the happenings🤢🤢Uhh huhhh swayam has gone too far now i expected the reason behind rey behind the bars but swayam literaaly has gone out of mind now😡 like WTH mann he totally has trust issues he is a grey person so hollow and what made him this hollow utghhh swayam why cant you just think about sharon before his actions now that he has created a rift and did an idiotic action i want him to make something very special for sharonAm feeling pity for sharon am just Loving nahh is there any other word after loving because i seriously adore her patience level😳😳 she is perfect in everything i soo wish i can be like her alas she was waiting for him and swayam so irresponsible i really didnt expect this from swayam he could atleast have confronted taani before taking any action but it might hurt his ego i thinkand literally he just didnt think about sharon for even a sec and the consequences here after throughout the update i was just holding my breath and when sharonTHAT I WAS ACTUALLY FALLING FOR YOUAnd my beat just skipped and a tear formed and my mind went blank and same goes now am totally blank i just couldn't this to be happen at this point of time and when she went unconscious and the care for her by swayam i think he loves and care for her but when he gets out of his mind nothing else matters and sharon ques might realise him a bit tht he is wrong asi think after when she gained conscious and the tone in him i dont know wether he might think about it by the end sharon decision and the tear fell down she really has gone through so much now its time she standsI literaaly scrapped this and have no idea what has gone so so sooo sorry and thank for the update do update soon love you and also PM the update
Amazingly written... He dint care nly...he ws in I Me Myself world ...thank god dt Sharon is nt giving up...waiting to knw wt she ll do to get rey out of d jail...update soon
Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue
The update was so so so beautiful and on the edge and crisp.
It conveyed the emotions of your characters to the point and so beautifully.I love how you write and the description of your characters please please update soon.Waiting to read the next update and PM me when you do so.
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