SwaRon FF - Desire - A/N Pg 73 - Page 36

Originally posted by: reet_26

Thank you for the update
Awesome update
plz update soon

Originally posted by: Applef

Welcome back..

It was awesome to actually continue reading one of my favourite story..

I was really looking forward for that..

Swaron relationship is getting better day by day..

but swayum is more ccarefuland now more confused about his feelings for sharon..

swayum and taani rekindled their relationship..

rey and vicky... Suspicious..

and now Taani with a pregnancy kit..

looking forward for the next part..

update soon..

Originally posted by: SHAhira-Swaron

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Unreserved🥱🥱

Firstly thanks a lot yar sorry correction thanks a ton actually i hadn't had any slightest idea that you will update this soon i badly wanted to review it as soon as i read it but there ws a marriage function so couldnt but now here iam with🥱😳😳

As the story is moving forward am getting sticked to it at first we liked sharon's character but now am liking swayam in this how innocently ge was gazing her actions and blabberings

And the swayam taani convo that was amazing i sooo badly wanted to read something like this and swayam was about to say love😲😲😲 but it will take time

I hope rey and vicky isn't plotting something then swaron convo you have actually penning everthing so awesome the way u bought swaron closeness in the midst of casual convo phewww ans swayam was controlling himself😆

Last but not least what an explode pregnancy strip in taani bag what's going on yar dont leave it in such a cliff hanger plzzz

And sorry for dis biggg review but couldnt hlp my excitement⭐️😊

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

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OH. MY. GOD. I had given up the hope! This is such an amazing surprise!

^Unreserve^

How much do I love this Swayam? Falling for Sharon! In love with her so much. He wants to love her and touch her. This kind of Swayam is my favourite kind of Swayam. He can't come near and he can't stay away.

Also, I am so glad to see Swayam is trying to mend his relationship with Taani because he feels guilty. He has realised the fact that he may have been unfair and I think that was very well done.

Also, you dropped some bomb there. Taani and pregnant? 😲

I am here to see what Sharon is going to tell Swayam now if Taani is really pregnant.

God! Now you please update this one regulary because I have missed this so much and I had given up my hopes on this because it had been such a long sabbatical.

I am really glad you are back.

Do update soon. Waiting very very eagerly.

-Chi

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

It was a lovely update with undercurrents of mystery and suspense.. Cant wait to read the next update and read Sharon and Tanis discussion..

It felt really nice reading your story after a long time.. Update the next part soon..

Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya

This was a really really pleasant surprise. I hadn't expected that you would continue it but I'm so glad you have. And you know why! Your writing speaks volumes of your beautiful way of story telling. So, yeah welcome back!

Coming to the update, it was smoothly progressive as always. I like how you're trying to reflect the changes in Swayam in his relationships with people other than Sharon as well, beginning with Taani. I'm just totally loving him here. He is beginning to accept the mistakes he made in the past and that too gracefully. Not exactly mistakes but all that he lost out on or the important people in his life who he ignored due to his difficult relationship. And that sure is a very positive change!

Sharon and Swayam are probably yet to name their relationship but I think that day isn't too far. Swayam's longing for her could be felt here. But probably I'm liking this pace. I love the little moments you create between them. I'd love to read more of them.

The ending was an interesting twist! Waiting for the next one eagerly! Please update soon this time :)

Shreya <3

Originally posted by: meghish

Welcome back. Am happy to see your post. I was awesome Please update next part soon.

Originally posted by: lovelysweet

Hello just read your story, its amazing to say the least

I loved it. Thank god you updated and will do so from now on as you said. I read very few swaron stories as i am a taarey fan and read only their stories, but this caught my attention. And i guess there is some taarey in it so it doesnt hurt to read.

Coming to the story itself, i love swayam's character in this. The develepment of his character is amazing. Its good he is letting go of his past. And sharon is also really understanding. Even if their marriage started badly i am happy that they are slowly getting there.

Loved the kiss between taarey and hoping they get together. Hmm maybe if taani is actually pregnant then it be reys. Hope rey is not planning anything big or trying to hurt swayam or taani

Anyways

Update the next part soon and pm me if you can thank you

Originally posted by: niki171

It's good to hear from you after a long time

There are many writers who don't post stories which they have kept on hold

But u came

Coming to the story

It's progressing wonderfully

Waiting for next

Originally posted by: Linea_Jacobsen

It was amazing eagerly waiting for next update