SwaRon FF - Desire - A/N Pg 73 - Page 31

I Love Love Love it...

It's jus Spectacular... Will definitely write more coz there's so much I wanna say :)

You take such time but you develop the story so beautifully, its genuinely pleases me to see your updates every time. What I love about this update is hands down the chemistry, its so so beautiful. I love how either Swayam or Sharon arn't aggressive about it, and it falls so lightly in the background. I have to say its such a treat read this with Simmi and Neil in it, you added them so perfectly. The other thing I love is that your build up is extremely good, and i say that is your power as a writer. You take time and patience and it shows in your results. What can i say, completely in love with this.

Neet

I luv d way u express dose feelings

Soft,slow n romantic

I m nt getting d PM's

Plz PM me NXT time

I've said it countless number of times, but I absolutely love the way you write. I could read all chapters not just once, but whenever i feel like seeking some solace from a love story that i absolutely adore from the deepest core of my heart. And your story gives me that happiness now that D3 has ended.

PS: You know how much i love your Sharon. But I was wondering (hoping) to get an insight into Swayam's character, from their relationship per se. Maybe if you could 😳

Its a beautiful FF. 👏👏. I just read the whole story back to back. Wow. Very well written FF. I just love it. Please do update FAST. 😃😃

Nd plz update it...