SwaRon FF - Desire - A/N Pg 73 - Page 27 | Channel V Dil Dosti Dance

Hakuna_Matata11

@Hakuna_Matata11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#261

Wow amazing update.

Loved it so much.

Fabulous.

Finally they kissed that was so real and natural.

Eagerly waiting for next part.

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#262

This is really amazing

M going crazy for dis ff

U r going superb

I just loved d whole story

It was a dreamy update

Plz update supersoon

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

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Posted: 8 years ago

#263

Amazing..
Thank u so much of this update...
Wow..Swaron first kiss..is really blissful
Loved this update..update soonish

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niki171

@niki171

Beginner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#264

Such a beautiful update

U described their blooming relationship so wonderfully

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mythreyii

@mythreyii

Navigator

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Posted: 8 years ago

#265

Heya

Yet again am extremely late..!! :(

Now coming to the updates..

Chapter-11

The burstoutnof Sharon and the ready to make effort of swayum

Neatly penned..!! Sharon's position was very realistic in her college.

The pressure to score good and the words of teachers got the bad.

She really felt guilty for shouting on swayum..!!

Chapter-12

This was so beautiful girl

Starting from swayums return, and his consecutive trip to London and a sweet small swaron moment before he leaves shocking an excited Sharon.

That was really sweet when swayum said its really OK on her shouting

And Sharon hugging swayum the moment she saw him

Then them missing each other being in London and India

Sharon is done with her exams..

The heart felt laughter of swayum and Sharon's was glad to c that

And then again those blissful swaron moments

Such an amazing update..

Pls update asap this time

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#266

This was SO DREAMY ❤️

I SO SO SO Loved this!!!!

This part started on such a different note and ended in another world 😃 Their hesitation in the beginning was so endearing to see and a large credit of it goes to how you keep things so casual and regular and still let them have their own beauty.

The kiss on cheek was such an 'Aww' moment there!

In London staying away so many miles apart couldn't come in between Swayam and his yearning for Sharon. He wanted to talk but didn't know what shouldhe talk and that fact was so adorable. It was like you see your crush and you wanna keep talking but he just answers for your questions 😆

The conversation in their bedrooms happen to be the best all the time. But then they don't talk outside bedrom too :v

Swayam's laughter on hearing that her name was Sharanjeet actually was blissful ^_^ And then what happened was asdfghhjklzxcv. I am sorry I was lost you know, in them. Swayam kissed her *Happy Tears* *sobs in happiness*

And then in the bedroom again❤️

Will you update fast? Pretty please! 😛

Chitra :)

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#267

fantastic update... nice writting so sharon kissed .. totally aswom update

update soon

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Neet

@.writtenletter.

Explorer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#268

What you do is so beautiful and completely mesmerising.

I think i had butterflies in my stomach when i was reading this, thats how sincere and amazing this is. You just captured all the right flavours, their focus and their lack of focus at the same time. Your writing has such ease that i simply can never 'not smile.'The kiss was perfect because i loved the fact that it was Sharon who initiated it, and he simply made it his after. The subtlety of romance is simple and yet so beautiful, cause it feels so feathery and perfect. Only wish is that please do update sooner, i wait for your work, especially when i myself am not writing.

Neet

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