SwaRon FF - Desire - A/N Pg 73 - Page 25

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Poor sharon has to study hard..
Yup she was in bad mood
But she shouldn't have snapped at swayam..
Poor he.

So taare ia gonna happen soon..
Nice
Thanks

Originally posted by: .ButterflyNeet.

You know what i loved about this chapter; how real you kept it. You nailed how humans interact on a emotional level, every dialogue and scene was so relatable. Its one of the reasons why your story is so unique, the way you show it and interoperate is so subtle. I know i said this the last time but i really can't wait to read Swayam becoming more prominent and how he deals with Sharon's words of getting over it. To a certain extent she was right because there are bigger problems in the world other than heartbreak, and perspective is so important. And thats why your Sharon is so good, she instills that perspective.

Mesmerised as always

Neet

Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_

Amazing update.

Loved it so much.

Very realistic portrayal of characters.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: srinidhi94

awesome update..

i like the action and reactions of each characters...swayam, sharon, rey, taani, kriya...

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome update..
Sharon behaviour towards swayam quite rude
Waiting for swayam reaction afterthat..
Pls give more swaron scenes..its a request
Update soon

Originally posted by: niki171

Awesome concept

It's damn difficult to imagine swayam n Sharon in such a role

I m glued to this story

Plezzz don't be like other writers who stop writing stories when they get less likes or comments

Just think that u have a unique writing style which very less people appreciate

Waiting for next chapter

Originally posted by: -DreamzGirl-

it's good to see swayam trying to make Some bond With her ..but the mess ...Waiting for Swayam reaction ...

Originally posted by: yadnyasawant

nxt update pls
it was superb to read
eagerly waiting for nxt part

Originally posted by: Anu_TanHa

Update update