Originally posted by: .ButterflyNeet.
And you leave me speechless all over again. A part of me missed Swayam in this chapter but his presence in the end was simply amazing, i couldn't have asked for more. I think him finding out is inevitable so i am hoping Sharon would tell him, but its there growing desire that is simply spellbinding, hence your title! Just one request from me that i want to see more of them together and also their growing intensity and intimacy. Her slight shyness is quite refreshing. Absolutely beautiful.
Neet
Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya
Brilliant ! Absolutely Brilliant!!
Firstly , sincere apologies for not commenting on the previous chapter. I was busy with exams and so it slipped out of my mind.I'm enthralled! Amazing plot ! I never knew my thoughts about Kriya would be changing this drastically after hearing her side of the story, but having said that, I don't hate her entirely cuz probably she was never in love with Swayam and so one cannot totally expect her to back off from something that would change her life forever but the way she did it hiding it all from Swayam and direspecting his feelings for her is totally unacceptable.Swayam, so hopelessly in love with her, maybe would have still let her go, had she spoken the truth. I completely sympathize with Swayam here.Sharon was as always amazing.The fighting spirit in her is appealing and no doubt Kriya had to reveal everything to Rey. I don't know if calling off the marriage is a right decision cuz we cannot ignore the fact that whatever happened was Kriya's past and Rey is her present. Dunno how it unfolds from here but surely I'm excited to know it, specially when Swayam comes into the picture.You have this absolutely mindblowing way of potraying your characters in various shades of gray but not letting them turn black. There have been many instances where you begin to dislike a particular character,but you can't outright hate that person. And this just goes too well with almost all of them,be it Anjali, Kriya ,Rey and not to forget the Swayam we had seen in the beginning. Sharon and Anjali's conversation does bring out Anjali as a manipulative woman but we cannot totally live on that as she had a point when she said that Swayam's decision of running away with Kriya was impulsive and unreasonable to some extent as well.Had she been more considerate of her child while handling the issue,she wouldn't have come across as such a scheming and contriving personality.The last part!..I read and re-read again.. That little moment of Swaron was beautiful and passionate . I really missed Swayam in this part but with the end ,I think you did make up for his absence. I really want to see more of Swaron now as this part really left me craving for more. The love is brewing slowly but it screams passion..can't wait to see them living some moments of love together.Please update sooner.~Shreya <3
Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_
wow amazing piece of chapter.
filled with raw emotions.
loved it.
eagerly waiting for the next part.
Originally posted by: sneharay
Mindblowing Update..
Everything is really a mess..
Swaron moment is really awesome..
Update soon...
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