SwaRon FF - Desire - A/N Pg 73 - Page 18

Loved the update! ;)

OH.MY.GOD.

I read and read and read and then you blasted a bomb in the end!

Swayam was in love with Kria for four years. Wanted to marry her at the age of 22 :O It feels so unbelievable to imagine that now given the kind of Swayam we have been seeing all along.

I cant imagine Swayam's state. Heartbreaks are the worst pain one can go through because ot doesn't even let you scream in solace. And not having any closure is like a knife cutting through your heart when its bleeding worst, for all I can imagine. So Swayam's pain was unbearable. I feel so sorry for that young guy who was crushed so badly by someone he loved so much.

But all this was bearable as a reader. I could go on till you decided to pull off the plug.

How can Kria do this? Just how? I would rather expect a high rate of self respect from a person who waits at table for a part time job but dream big. She left him for money? Thats just PATHETIC! She could have just left if she wanted to but she chose to crack a deal out of it. That sucks. She was 22 not 16 that she could drain all of her dignity down the drain just like that. Damn! And she still decides to defend her action? Even now? She tries to justify it? That more PATHETIC.

I am so on Sharon's side right now. Damn I am so mad on Kria -_-

Chitra!

Loved it...
Finally swayam told sharon..
He will be relieved..

Kriya prefered money over swayam...
Not done kriya..

Update soon

What a mega update I must say! You surely know how to drop a nuclear bomb. What a crisply written chapter, but more so what an intriguing chapter from a story perspective. Absolutely in love with the Swayam you present in this story, the shades and layering is so intricate and well crafted that I can't help but commend you. Its the best thing in your work, you layer characters up with such precision that i can't help but smile reading their emotions. As for the past with Kriya, its heart breaking and somewhere deep down the debate she presented was so believable, but the second she accepted that money i felt she let go of all the morals that held her together. My only wish is that you don't villainies her character but show this has a part of her dark shades, I feel your story is too good to have a black and white villain! Sorry if i have overstepped, its just i am loving this so much that i wish i was writing it! Simply can't wait for the next part!

Waiting for next part eagerly.

Update soon we are waiting to read more

Awesome updates
update soon and plz pm me

Helooo

Waiting for next part eagerly.

waiting for an update eagerly.