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Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
It was one hell of a shocking scene where Swayam actually say those words. And your take on his feelings was painful to say the least.
But this part is as big as an atom in a molecule.
The nastiest and the most fearsome thing about letting go is that dreadful thought, that if I let go of her will she care enough to stitch it back?
I loved these lines. They were so impactful.
Swayam's hurt, the clash between his sanity and love, you potrayed it beautifully. He was broken and he knew he wouldn't be able to hate her, the question was how would he survive now?
Lovely work once again.
Chitra :)
Hey Chitra:)...I love it when I get a comment from an amazing writer like you. Yeah for a change I wanted to try and see how it is to write something painful :P
You quoted those lines, means a lot to me. Happy that your interpretation of Swayam matches so well with my intension:)
Thanks for being so encouraging:)
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