Swaron Os - Ripped - Page 2

It was one hell of a shocking scene where Swayam actually say those words. And your take on his feelings was painful to say the least.


But this part is as big as an atom in a molecule.

The nastiest and the most fearsome thing about letting go is that dreadful thought, that if I let go of her will she care enough to stitch it back?

I loved these lines. They were so impactful.

Swayam's hurt, the clash between his sanity and love, you potrayed it beautifully. He was broken and he knew he wouldn't be able to hate her, the question was how would he survive now?

Lovely work once again.

Chitra :)

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

i jst don't knw wht to say
u bring that horrible scenes memory
i still feel swayam's defeat his agony
that was a scene which actually tore m n i seriously hated sharon for that time being
u jst penned it so well
d swayam he is angry upset with her heartbroken by her bt still this stupod heart jst beat for her
beautifully written
awesome os


p.s :im d first one to comment seriously😊

Originally posted by: SHAhira-Swaron

M jst spel bounded by d way u emoted swayam felngs each nd evry wrd specifies swayam nd d lst prt ws awsm "it can never be passing phase bcoz she still rules my ripped heart nd always will" jst lvd d whole os keep writing more

Originally posted by: .nerfherder

This was a very strong scene, emotionally. Your take on it was really good. :D

The helplessness Swayam felt, his clashing emotions regarding Sharon, his defeated stance; nicely portrayed. Great job.

Cheers. :)

Originally posted by: Keechu_SwaRon

That was a brilliant piece dear. I really loved it.

Its been long since i read one SwaRon OS and your words, that scene and their pain, agony, everything was beautifully written.👏

Originally posted by: sneharay

Fabulous..👍🏼

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Poor swayam had to suffer so much

But he just cant forget sharon..
He loves her deeply..
Nice one

Originally posted by: mythreyii

A very beautiful os

Well penned

The words were as impactful as the scene was

Right words at right place making more effect.

Swayum can never fall out of love for Sharon

Her actions at times confuses him and she herself sometimes

Beautifully written

Well when show was on air I felt bad for Sharon and not swayum I know that's weird may b bcoz of my love for Sharon's character or bcoz it was vrushyy as Sharon.

But Sharon is one of the unique character and I love that role.

At the end nice os..

Originally posted by: --Ana--

Oh man the depth.

Something that defines this OS would be profundity.

The insight you have given in this story, has drawn me into a fascination.

His frangible state, has been written with such care and intricacy. A good job done. :D

Love Ana ❤️

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

well written piece... write more... 😊

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