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last part was awesome😛...do pm me whenever u upadate...thank u👍🏼
Thank you..😊
Will pm u.!
last part was awesome😛...do pm me whenever u upadate...thank u👍🏼
Originally posted by: mythreyii
Heya ayu
Beautifully written..The whole flashback was crisp and clear without dragging..Loved how swayum was in solace jus by being with herAnd when he asks her to listen to his song was all the more sweet. Really loved it the cruise is like a value addition to the ss. Swayum was acting to b drunk is the surprise element.And the way he startes convo in the morning was really nice.The last part was all the more good when he ram behind her to console her jus like she did..Beautifully written..Awaiting next one badly its jus growing interesting
Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Chapter one..
They are badly hurt..
But glad to know that they found solace in each other's company..
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Swayam was acting...
Nice move..
Loved it
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