SwaRon SS : Love In A Cruise *updated Ch 2 pg 5 (10/1)* - Page 4

NUPUR AGARWAL

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Loved d update ...its amazing 👏

How swayam shared his life secret wid sharon n den sharon hugged him to lessen his pain is beautifully penned down ...

den sharon was still nt sure abt sharing her secret wid a stranger bt den d excitement of meeting him next day n swayam gettng impatient ...d story on cruise is gettng interestng wid each update

last hug was d bst ...waitng for d next part eager to knw wat's in store for us

Update soon 😊

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jas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

awesome update

love how swayum share his pain with sharon

that sanaya hate her😡 poor swayum

but sharon was not not sure to share her grief with a stranger

the last hug was awesome

waiting for sharon side of story

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Sneha Ray

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Awesome update..loved it.. 👍🏼

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rbpll

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

last part was awesome😛...do pm me whenever u upadate...thank u👍🏼

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mythreyii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Heya ayu

Beautifully written..

The whole flashback was crisp and clear without dragging..

Loved how swayum was in solace jus by being with her

And when he asks her to listen to his song was all the more sweet. Really loved it the cruise is like a value addition to the ss. Swayum was acting to b drunk is the surprise element.

And the way he startes convo in the morning was really nice.

The last part was all the more good when he ram behind her to console her jus like she did..

Beautifully written..

Awaiting next one badly its jus growing interesting

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Aayushi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: lechu10
nice update..:)

Thank you!😊

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Aayushi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: --lavanya--
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Ty !😊

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Aayushi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: --NupurSwaron--
Loved d update ...its amazing 👏
How swayam shared his life secret wid sharon n den sharon hugged him to lessen his pain is beautifully penned down ...
den sharon was still nt sure abt sharing her secret wid a stranger bt den d excitement of meeting him next day n swayam gettng impatient ...d story on cruise is gettng interestng wid each update
last hug was d bst ...waitng for d next part eager to knw wat's in store for us
Update soon 😊

Thank you!😃

Glad u liked Swayam's pain and Sharon's remedy.😉

Keep the excitement ,I'll update very soon!

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Aayushi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: vrishan
awesome update
love how swayum share his pain with sharon
that sanaya hate her😡 poor swayum
but sharon was not not sure to share her grief with a stranger
the last hug was awesome
waiting for sharon side of story

Thankss..😳

Glad u found it nice and the last hug too..

She will share soon.!😉

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Aayushi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: sneharay
Awesome update..loved it.. 👍🏼

Thanks!!😊

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