SwaRon OS: Demise Of Barricades

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Posted: 8 years ago
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The story is inspired from a Chinese folktale. Liang and zhu love story is a one of Chinese's most famous folktales. This story has its resemblance from there. So as the basis of the story is a folktale, the setting too is of the olden times and Swayam and Sharon aren't true to the characterisation you have known, they are different in this story.


"You're not meho? You're not a boy? You're Sharon? A girl?"



Swayam questioned Sharon for what she had done. She had lied.



*



"Father, I have the right to study"



"No you don't. You are a girl Sharon, you won't be allowed to go to school."



"I will at my own risk"



she stormed out of her house with determination flowing through her eyes.



*



"I'm Meho. I'm new here. I hope I learn a lot from here."



"I'm swayam, I hope so too. Welcome to our school."



swayam welcomed the new student, his voice was in good cheer.


She had hid her identity, meho was Sharon. Sharon was meho.


Meho was a boy for the outside world, for swayam. Sharon was only known to herself.


*



"I had to lie. I had to do it for my rights."



Sharon re-covered her face in her veil and fled from the lake.



It was night, if anyone would have spotted them, they would have been put to death.



But he couldn't stop his rumination about those brown eyes.




*



"I'm swayam. I'm here to ask your daughter's hand. I want to marry her."



swayam begged sharon's paterfamilias



"That can not happen. She is getting married to Zhou. It is fixed."


was the reply he got. Swayam left the room. The sky formed disturbing clouds and it suddenly become dark.




*




Sharon sat in her carriage. Her mind only thinking about swayam. She had never given the slightest hint, what she felt for him.



But the truth was she felt only volumes of affection for him. She was passing the river which bordered the neighbouring village where she saw a group of people surrounding a body.



She got down to see what had happened. And then she too made way to the earth below.



"Swayam"


she screamed standing in front of his grave. She like a reaction fell to the ground and never came back to life.


Her body was buried with his. And as their bodies met their souls changed into butterflies and flew through the sky.


There were no more dark clouds. It was only the celebration of two lovers uniting.


^^^^^

I can't believe I actually posted it 🤢 According to me it sucks. According to Astha its good. According to my best friend its really good. 😆
So if you guys have the urge to slap me for making you read it. Then You know who to catch. 🤣
Title credit - Astha 🤗


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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was really sweet.
A small one but really sweet..
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Ok I'm not commenting anything because I didn't understand the story... Sooo Sorry
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sorry...i didn't understand the story.but it was short and sweet😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Short but amazing . Sharon had to disguise herself as a guy to get her rights.. that's was so sad

Both of them died for each other and beside each other . Very Emotional. loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Short and something different ...wonderful effort 😃
Never read SwaRon inspired by Chinese story ...really nice ..
Keep writing more and more ...and do update ur ffs soonish 👍🏼

P.s - ur note 🤣 u r mad Ana 🤗 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --lavanya--

Short and something different ...wonderful effort 😃

Never read SwaRon inspired by Chinese story ...really nice ..
Keep writing more and more ...and do update ur ffs soonish 👍🏼

P.s - ur note 🤣 u r mad Ana 🤗 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing piece of work anaghu... 👏

keep writing swaron story on old love stories if possible... 😳

I really liked this Os...

keep it up 👍🏼


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Posted: 8 years ago
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A very nice and different One- Shot.
It was interesting to read.

really liked it.

keep writing.

-shivani
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