SwaRon SS: It's What We Do/Breathe In The Air |COMPLETED| - Page 23

Nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

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I just read the story...and I actually like it...mostly because I can't predict what's going to happen next...I would love to read more so please PM me when you update...thanks

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Shreya

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Posted: 8 years ago

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This was sooo freaking beautiful!!

Firstly thanks for beginning exactly from the point where you left! The kiss was much needed! It was overwhelming to see them live their moment at last ,even if it was temporary (for now, you know what people will do to you if you don't bring them together at the end! So better play a role of cupid for them)

I loved the part where he calls her sweetplum here, the name began to mean so much more after this part. As much as I feel sad for both of them for being caught in such a helpless situation, I can't help but smile to see them being each other's comfort at the same time. Probably love does that to you ...you don't mind to bear a pain that breaks you into pieces just to live a single moment of love...

The last part! That confession had so much depth , I can't even express in the right words. It's probably one of the most beautiful confessions I've read. Their pain, helplessness and longing for each other could be felt so strongly that it hurt.

After Swayam's reply, I don't think I would be able to get this out of my head for a long time! I read this chapter two days back (sincere apologies for a late comment, I was unwell ) and its still in my head! God knows how many times I read the last part!

Please update next one soon..pretty please with a cherry on top *_* !

Love , ( hugs and chocolates if you update fast ! )

Shreya <3

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Nishi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

^ hugs and chocolates sound extremely tempting. Hope you are well now. :)

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Shreya

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: .nerfherder
^ hugs and chocolates sound extremely tempting. Hope you are well now. :)

I hope tempting enough! ...Yes I'm fine now 😊!!

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Nishi

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Edited by .nerfherder - 8 years ago

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Nishi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
R-E-S-E-R-V-E-D.

^U-N-R-E-S-E-R-V-E^

Statutory Warning I will throw you down the Niagara Falls if you don't end them up together.

You were right. It was a cool update. I liked the pace, the calm, the talking in head thing, the atmosphere. Also that previously on thing made it sound like I am watching House M.D.

Irrelevant I know! But I am sorry I have become lousy at commenting I guess!

These people are in deep shit to be honest and I hope you do something to bring them out of it and if you don't find a way just remember if Ross can end up with Rachel after being married three times and two babies then Swayam definetely can fix this. 😛

Oh! And I loved the dialouges this time. Marvellous stuff there.

-Chitra.

Warning duly noted.

Thanks <3. Irrelevant thoughts are always welcome dude. :p

I hope I do something to bring them together too. People are like ready to throw me off waterfalls and all. Like jeez. :3

Thanks a lot Chi. <33

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Nishi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: VReSHna
So much Wait!!! But well your stories are always worth the Wait😳
Swaron
Sighhh!!!
My heart leaps, my heart hurts, my heart enjoys but then my heart clenches!!!!
oh what you do to us!!!
All in all Love it as Always :)

Aw, thanks. <3

I'm so glad that it's worth the wait. Else waiting just sucks. 😆

Thank you so much!

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Nishi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: sneharay
Beautiful update.. 😊

Thank you. :)

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Nishi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: srinidhi94
Wow...that was a wonderful update
The place.. the calmness... both of them together with so much love and thoughts...
Very well written...👏👏👏

Thank you so much. :)

They do really love each other, don't they?

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Nishi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: Keechu_SwaRon

It was serene, Lol i couldn't find an another word. 😛

Please let them be together, it's heart wrenching to see so much love, and to know that it is temporary. :(

The one word is enough Keechu di. :p

Oh, believe me, I want to see them together too.

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