SwaRon SS: It's What We Do/Breathe In The Air |COMPLETED| - Page 20

Originally posted by: ExpectoPatronus

so freaking awsm update... its getting interesting... update soon 😊

Originally posted by: SHAhira-Swaron

I still can't beleive what i read Erhh the update held so much pain&helplesnes at 1 point when sh asked THEN WHY my heart just sank&the last part I LOVE U my tears started running im going to kill u for making this unpredictable Amidst all these i loved t

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome update..so beautiful.. 👏

Originally posted by: .ButterflyNeet.

I didn't know how i missed this, but i love it.

You capture silence and sadness perfectly in this piece.

I don't know if i can say anything anymore that would describe this any more perfectly.

Neet

Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya

So all my predictions regarding Nisha and her child have to just die in thin air 😕

Reserved for now..

*Unreserve*

You've just twisted this story so much by now and surely I'm going to feel too annoyed and sad and irritated and I dunno what if Swayam is the father for real(God I'm still hoping! ) but then I cannot deny that I loved SwaRon in this part, somehow this sad and melancholic atmosphere you've created appeared beautiful with both of them there to read each other's minds and those unsaid words.

I really have no idea on how its going to proceed from here on so I can just wait for you to bring them out clean(by clean I mean without torturing your characters and your readers) of this ugly mess.

As always unpredictable and brilliant writing Nishi :) (Just too sad 🤔😒 )

Update soonish please...

Shreya <3

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Oh this is sad..
I still believe that nisha is lying..
Hope this turns out to be true..

I so wish that sharon could have told him aloud..

Thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

Reserved. B|

You do have chocolates with you right?

^Unreserve^

This made me Sad. And nothing else. You can just go on eating chocolates for your pleasure, because for now I think I will keep ugly people in safety of Azkaban.

You didnt move story much, you know! It didnt help.

And I loved Swayam and Sharon's close heartfelt concealed-yet-laying-it-all-out conversation. But thats not gonna ease your killing, if you are willing to get killed in the future 😉

You are still the Wormtail and I am still the Padfoot! 😛

You ofcourse know what I mean!

Chitra :)

Originally posted by: Hp_TvD_mAnIc

aswom updatee

Originally posted by: skywalker.

Why do you torture my babies so much? 🥺 This was such a melancholic update.

I felt so bad for Swayam and Sharon. One tied in an unwanted relationship and another hanging in between, not able to express her feelings. And the way you wrote it was really good, one could feel the sadness the characters experienced. Just end their misery soon. 😳

Update soon!

I know I'm late. 🤡