Wow !! That was so so unexpected. I wouldn't have ever been able to guess that painful past of Sharon. The amount of guilt and pain she's carrying inside her, I am pleasantly amazed how she's made it through till now.One could have just died of the suffocating emotions. Sharon stole the show completely here for me.I can't imagine how she lived with keeping that inside her for so long.
Finally she found someone to let that all out to .And it surely had to be Swayam. What followed was definitely a need to heal their wounded souls. Maybe no realization of love yet,but they both know it was an act that took place with true emotions. So yeah there's no looking back now.
It would be interesting to see how love is going to blossom from here on.You are totally unpredictable so I'm not even going to try guessing.
The parts written in Italics were my favorite lines here.They simply added depth to your brilliant skill of story telling.
I said you were being evil. Guess you took that seriously and gave us much more than a kiss!😳 Although whatever happened was totally situational. Can I hope next time something like this happens it would be purely out of love?..I guess no. No one can beat you when it comes to unpredictability. So lets just wait to see what you have in store for us. Don't make the wait too long:)
Beautifully written!!
Love,
Shreya
Edited by Spark.Shreya - 8 years ago
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