New Swaron FF The Undesired Desire Part 2 on pg 5 - Page 3

Sneha Ray

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Wow..superb..its awesome update.. 👍🏼
Update soon..can't wait to read further.. 😊

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AS

@--lavanya--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Haha ! Awesome 😃

Update soon !

Loving it ! 😊

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

amazing update jst loved it swaron r tom n jerry ruhi is sharon's friend update soon

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Neet

@.writtenletter.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Loving the beginning, please write longer chapters!!! I really want to see how do u guys write Ruhi as a character.

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Trupti Tamore

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

superb update 😃

Miss Phoolan Devi🤣 and Mr. Khadoos😆

swayam is her boss poor shar got shocked😲

flashback 😆 its was tooo good

dekha nahi kuch nahi nd pitna chalu aur chor bhi bana diya uske hi ghar me 😆

loved there 1st meet and ek durse re ko ache naam diya hai dono ne (specially sharon's name)

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Aneesha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Ha, am loving this. This is some interesting write up. Except Ruhi, I felt both Sharon and Swayam like school going kids fighting

Thanks for the pm

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NUPUR AGARWAL

@--NupurSwaron--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Wat an awesome update ...lovely

Sharon gonna work in d same company n swayam is her new 'khadoos' boss ...its gonna be intersting ...

Flashback was intersting ...is sharon going to stay wid dem in d same house too ? 😉

Waiting to see how d love story of Miss Phoolan Devi n Mr Khadoos wil kickstart 😆

Update soon 😊

Edited by --NupurSwaron-- - 8 years ago

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ROSE

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

The love story of Miss Phoolan Devi and Mr. Khadoos

Waiting eagerly😛

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Ananya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

hahahahaaa... nice start... suru me he jhagre... :P update soon...

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mythreyii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Hey ana and shiri
Beautiful chap ppl
A total fresh characterisation on ruhi. Loved it
Now sharon will h staying with swayum and work under him it's going to be super fun to witness their tom and jerry
Enjoyed reading but chota tha
Continue the good work

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