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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: swaronaaliya

Hey it was nice part loved it.thanks for pm.


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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: aneesha93

Nice update. Thanks for the pm


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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ritz15

Wowww dii both the parts were amazing ๐Ÿ‘

First of all let me tell u tht walk to remember is my all time fav novel nd u just made this title more beautiful with ur story
hard to imagine swayam as a bully๐Ÿ˜†
Bt u just left it in suspense๐Ÿ˜ญ
Now Plss update fast
Love uโค๏ธ


Ritz ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
this was my first reaction when i saw your comment ๐Ÿ˜†
Thank you my pyari sis๐Ÿ˜ณ
haa i want you to imagine hard ๐Ÿ˜†
Even that novel is my fav too..im gonna read that once again๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

fantastic part๐Ÿ‘


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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

Hey Lovely Update Greeshma.

More than whatever was happening I liked the emotions that flew through the update. The calmness, the feelings, the excitement and anticipation. . .It was lovely to read them walking like that. And the end where he leant closer to her *sigh*it didnt turn into a kiss just yet. You better give me a SwaRon kiss in the last update ๐Ÿ˜›

Chitra :)


Thank you chitra.
See i wanted to watch a walk like that in d3 but we didnt get it...so i did this ๐Ÿ˜›
You will get it.๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: SHA_85

Mashallah what an update dii ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

full on yours style wala ๐Ÿ˜†

why he was testing her patience ,he really loves to irritating ๐Ÿ˜†
and she loves to get frustrated (both are crazy in this)
going to date with him was her FANTASY wah kya baat hai ,
abhi pata chala why she said to him then and there its a DATE ๐Ÿ˜Š

he made a HERO types entry ๐Ÿ˜Ž
and she wanted to be angry but blush karne lagi hayeeโ˜บ๏ธ
swayam saath me hai and coffee ki padi hai iss ladki ko
there memory with a walk to remember ๐Ÿ˜Š

there walk was simply swaronishโค๏ธ ,
just holding hand but making it special
back to school again wow๐Ÿ‘

swayam has stolen her novel "a walk to remember" ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
this is there memory (cute si memory)๐Ÿ˜Š
he has to say something hum sab bhi last part
se wohi soch rahe hai what he wants to say her ???๐Ÿ˜•
where the did he went ????๐Ÿ˜’
I remembered ab tumhe khone se darta hu wala scene

I really got attracted to there convo after long silence
it was not so romantic but don't know really love it(its swaron's magic)

The line The past became the present; once again, he left her alone!
MY GOD SO MUCH EMOTIONS IN ONE LINE ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
and i imagined there walk at queen necklace , school nahi hai vaha ( i guess) but the place is prefect for them๐Ÿ˜Š


You comment always make me to jump around my room...thank you for the detailed comment...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sneharay

Lovely update.. ๐Ÿ˜Š


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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: --Ana--

This was an adorable update :D

The feels in this update is unexplainable :)


So many emotions following in this one update :') It was such an endearing peice <3 I couldn't stop myself vocalise an 'Aww' from my mouth when they were walking. ^.^

And the best part ; what I feel is, I'm reading 'A walk to remember' these days. And have to say its awesome till wherever I've read :)

Keep writing di <3
Update soon :)
And yes Get well soon too :D
Love Ana โค๏ธ


Yes that is an awesome book.
Im gonna read it once again๐Ÿ˜›
Love u . im fine now๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49

Updating di๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: mythreyii

Hey keechu
The update was amazind and more adorable
Sharon was waiting for him.in the cafe and swayum was seeing her go restless from a safe distance.
The little swaron moments were cute. The walk was damn cute. The way both were lost in memories was sweet. But the best part is how beautifully u had written it that we could easily connect. The walk to school and the sweet fight in the abandoned corridor over the book was hilarious.
Now growing curious for the next update


Thank you mythreyi.๐Ÿ˜ณ
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