Wowww dii both the parts were amazing ๐
First of all let me tell u tht walk to remember is my all time fav novel nd u just made this title more beautiful with ur storyhard to imagine swayam as a bully๐Bt u just left it in suspense๐ญNow Plss update fastLove uโค๏ธ
Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
Hey Lovely Update Greeshma.
More than whatever was happening I liked the emotions that flew through the update. The calmness, the feelings, the excitement and anticipation. . .It was lovely to read them walking like that. And the end where he leant closer to her *sigh*it didnt turn into a kiss just yet. You better give me a SwaRon kiss in the last update ๐
Chitra :)
Mashallah what an update dii ๐
full on yours style wala ๐why he was testing her patience ,he really loves to irritating ๐and she loves to get frustrated (both are crazy in this)going to date with him was her FANTASY wah kya baat hai ,abhi pata chala why she said to him then and there its a DATE ๐he made a HERO types entry ๐and she wanted to be angry but blush karne lagi hayeeโบ๏ธswayam saath me hai and coffee ki padi hai iss ladki kothere memory with a walk to remember ๐there walk was simply swaronishโค๏ธ ,just holding hand but making it specialback to school again wow๐swayam has stolen her novel "a walk to remember" ๐this is there memory (cute si memory)๐he has to say something hum sab bhi last partse wohi soch rahe hai what he wants to say her ???๐where the did he went ????๐I remembered ab tumhe khone se darta hu wala sceneI really got attracted to there convo after long silenceit was not so romantic but don't know really love it(its swaron's magic)The line The past became the present; once again, he left her alone!MY GOD SO MUCH EMOTIONS IN ONE LINE ๐ฒand i imagined there walk at queen necklace , school nahi hai vaha ( i guess) but the place is prefect for them๐
This was an adorable update :D
The feels in this update is unexplainable :)So many emotions following in this one update :') It was such an endearing peice <3 I couldn't stop myself vocalise an 'Aww' from my mouth when they were walking. ^.^And the best part ; what I feel is, I'm reading 'A walk to remember' these days. And have to say its awesome till wherever I've read :)Keep writing di <3Update soon :)And yes Get well soon too :DLove Ana โค๏ธ
Originally posted by: mythreyii
Hey keechu
The update was amazind and more adorable
Sharon was waiting for him.in the cafe and swayum was seeing her go restless from a safe distance.
The little swaron moments were cute. The walk was damn cute. The way both were lost in memories was sweet. But the best part is how beautifully u had written it that we could easily connect. The walk to school and the sweet fight in the abandoned corridor over the book was hilarious.
Now growing curious for the next update
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