I have said this so many times that it has become repetitive now- I adore your writing style! One can feel each emotion that you have portrayed. Your characters and what they are going through, feels so real. Needless to say I loved your Swayam. A lead with grey shades is something that writers generally don't feel comfortable with but you wrote your lead that way and you made me love him, despite of his earlier actions. I have said it earlier too - when he mentions/thinks of their 1st night together as "rape" made my eyes pop because to be honest, I don't recall reading a story where the lead would even consider this.
Many a times I have been so conflicted on whose pov to agree with. And making a reader go through such conflicting emotions isn't an easy job. But you are one writer who did this, which made the story a treat to read.
I really enjoyed reading this FF (especially the monologues in the beginning of each chapter and the parts where the character's morality was in question) and hope to see more from you especially dark themed stories (if you plan to write more in this genre).
Edited by ErisedWitch45 - 8 years ago
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