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Eagerly Waiting for the update!!! Update soon!!! And once again awesome work!!!
Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
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This part had so many emotions that I was in a way drained towards the end. There were two moments which just stuck in my mind one was they holding their daughter and the other FREAKY HELL THEY ARE GETTING MARRIED!!!!! Uff this is going to be great if only Swayam stops thinking. I am going to kick his butt if he creates in any rift. . .Please let Sharon knock some sense in him or either you wont be able to save this guy from me -_-
I loved Sharon in this update. Somehow her sadness was bare here and it touched me.
You do an amazing job with situations and your characters in those situations which is something I really love. Well Done Neet for such a honest write up <3
Chitra :)
Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya
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*Unreserve*This update left me spellbound! Such profundity!! I am still into it!Sharon's thoughts was the most amazing part for me in this update. Swayam can appear to be a demon to her mind after all he had done but her poor heart is owned by him now. His bitter sweet poison is what makes her heart beat now.And that is why inspite of seeing the light at the other end, she wants to just turn away from it and live in the darkness ,cuz perhaps that seems easier than saying good bye to her demon.Her condition is so miserable. She is in desperate need of his love and it tears me apart to see her being kept devoid of it. I am emotionally drained seeing her like that.Sharon's reconciliation with her family was a tiny breath of relief. Her happiness lies in something else right now but nevertheless atleast there are some people who are making her feel wanted.I'm happy things cleared out between Rey and her. Thankfully he is some form of support system to stop her from breaking :(Swayam is the only one who can put an end to his and Sharon's misery. I really crave for an emotional patch up cuz they need to cry their hearts out to save their souls drowning in the oceans of pain and misery.This re-marriage is a ray of hope for their new beginning and I hope Swayam proves it to be one and let those disturbing thoughts leave his mind for once.I don't know how to appreciate such a PERFECT work with the right words. All I can tell you is you touch my heart with every part you write putting so much effort into it and surely it always turns out to be a masterpiece.Update the next part soon :)Shreya <3
U r penning dis story really well, I like d shape it's taking,swaron ki shaadi,wanna read further can't wait anymore to knw wt swayam says ,update soon
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