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Posted: 8 years ago
U r penning dis story really well, I like d shape it's taking,swaron ki shaadi,wanna read further can't wait anymore to knw wt swayam says ,update soon
Edited by raksh11 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update..well penned
Update soon next part..waiting eagarly 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update.
swayam weds sharon loved it.
eagarly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing up dates dear you have pen down Sharons emotion being neglected by her husband so well and the Swayums feeling "Even if his heart wanted to keep her and protect her forever, he knew she would never agree, not after what he did, not after realising that what he did was rape." really made me cry. Waiting for more updates.
Edited by sweety71 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Swaron remarriage...πŸ‘πŸ‘
ur updates r always exciting...
love it every time...😊
cant wait for next prt...
but Swayams guilt is wht worrying me...πŸ˜”
will he ever come back from tht and
script a new beginning with new life "Seher"...
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Posted: 8 years ago
And I am amazed as ever!!!! This is just amazzinnnggg!!!!! Hope you update soon! And alsodear,please do update"AN UNFORGETTABLE MISTAKE" its a beautiful work as well! And once you end this,hope to see morr of swaron ff by you!!! Which will be as amazing and as outstanding as always!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing upd
even last chapters were amazing
sry for not commenting for so many upd's but with no doubt it was awesome as always and you know how to keep yours readers entertaining with yours writing and loved the way you had penned there emotions
waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Stupid swayum..
Yr ye sharon ko kas ke do thapppad lagane chahieπŸ˜†
love rey nd sharon and their talk..
WOW their marriage..
exciting
Nice update
Update soon
Thanxs for pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Lovestory55 I want to say so many things, and highlight so many amazing moments in your work, your technique of conveying inner emotions, describing what is seen but also expressing it in a way where we get to read between the lines, but I'll say one thing that may help sum it up:

If you ever published this story as a book, I can guarantee you, it would be the National best selling novel for a very long time to come.
Edited by zaara.fkm - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
This is awesome dear.
God swayam you should have talked to her...

Kriyansh...loved them..
Rey is gonna be a great bro..

Pleasantly shock...
Swaron and kriyansh marriage..
Good
thanks 4 d pm
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