(Dark/Mature) Dangerous Liaisons SS (Complete) - Page 20

Reserved.

How come I never got a PM? :O

^Unreserve^

This was exhausting. Because of the way you wrote it felt to me that I am standing with Sharon and feeling her pain. . .It was THAT REAL! You put up a very detailed description here about which I have no idea but it all seemed almost right :v

The starting with Swayam and Ruhi's video. ...It was so heart breaking to see Sharon and feel her condition. I think every person can relate to that feeling because everyone has experienced it in some way and it hammers your heart brutally :/

The end with Swayam's state of shock was mervellous stroke. I hope to read more of Swayam's side in the upcoming parts.

Chitra :)

Its mindblowing..very well emotionally described 😊

Amaazinnggg!!!!!!! Just out of the world!!! But please this time update soon and dont end it so fast pleaaaseee

superb update... sharon's condition dekhke bahot bura lga... & hw cud swayam do dirty wid ruhi aftr marrying sharon.??

Loved all the chapters...update soon

This is fabulous writing Neet. Don't know what else to say, its just GREAT. Beautifully (and to an extend horrifyingly - the labor part) executed. Am still shivering after reading this update. Please please please update sooner.

really im speechless. its so emotional sharon in so much pain. u r brilliant dear. y swayam doing dirty things wit dat stupid ruhi. i just hate her plz dont bring her b/w swaron. make swayam to realize his mistake and y u stop at that moment. eagerly waiting for ur one more brilliant update please zaldi se zaldi update karo. plz as soon as possible update the next chappy its my request. once again with ur writing skills made us speechless.
thankyou for pm

I am feeling soo bad for both Swayam and Sharon that I dont know what to say anymore...

As much as this part was roller coaster of emotion and pain...i think n i hope...theirs more to the story of swayam n ruhi's dirty work💔

Hey Neet :)