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Firstly I'm really happy with your pace...Whenever I see a PM from you I'm literally jumping in excitement to know that there's a new update! π And that itself makes me so happy!
You really have an amazing command over your language...You play with your words beautifully! When it comes to writing mature content you know exactly how to maintain a balance and it never looks vulgar,and that is a difficult thing to do..good job:)
Although I didn't really like the involvement of Ruhi in Swayam's life to such a personal level,I'm happy that its making Sharon realize her feelings for him slowly..For Swayam too,probably the jealousy is going to do wonders..or should I say that it already is?..
I really like Reyam's bond..Rey can actually make Swayam admit to things which he wouldn't admit to himself.
Rishi is a loving father-in-law and Sharon's growing attachment to him was a pleasant thing to watch.
Waiting to see what Swayam is going to do with the sudden realization and how is Sharon going to go through the same feeling too...
Brilliant work yet again!!..Take a bow! π
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