SwaRon OS: Pehli Nazar Mein by astha

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Posted: 8 years ago
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SawRon OS : Pehli Nazar Mein




"Damn it! Not again!" these words escaped from the mouth of an irritated swayam as he hurried down through the stairs of his apartment.
He was late for his office and this week it would be his third time when he would recieve a huge lecture from his senior official, and that too on the topic- 'Punctuality'!!!
"Oh god! Why me??" he was thinking all this when suddenly *thud* He banged with someone who was carrying a big load of boxes.


He looked up to say sorry but as soon as he saw the person with whom he had banged his breadth got caught in his throat and all he could manage was- "s...so...sorr..."
"What the hell! Dikhta nahi hai kya? Oh god! saara saaman gira diya! Ab khade hokar shakal kyu dekh rahe ho? Help ki ummeed rakhna bhi bekar hai tum jaise logon se!" Sharon was hell irritated as this was her first day in her new apartment and she had not at all expected it to start in such a way.
She was collecting all her fallen stuff from the stairs while cursing Swayam under her breadth, on the other hand Swayam was so lost in her from the moment he had seen her that till now he hadn't even realised the situation he was in.
Sharon gathered all her stuff and went, but Swayam was still standing there and was smiling to himself sheepishly.




Suddenly it struck to him that he had to go to office and he was aldready very late. But now he was not in a hurry, he walked slowly while blushing and smiling to himself.
Although he recieved a huge lecture after reaching his office but as he had already expected it therefore it didn't bother him much.


The thing which was bothering him throughout his work was 'HER'!He so desperately wanted to know who she was, what was her name, will she mind going on a coffee with him? In short he was eager to know each and every thing about her and this eagerness was driving him crazy.
It was evening when he reached his apartment. He was tired because of all the goof-ups he had done while working in his office as he was not able to concentrate on anything.
After reaching his flat, he took a shower and changed himself to a lower and a tee. He decided to spend some time in balcony.


He went to his balcony and felt the refreshing air hit his face. He felt something different in the air today, he didn't know what the difference was but it felt good.
Suddenly his eyes fell on the nearby balcony and his heart started beating at an abnormal pace. He saw her angelic face and a smile crept on his lips, he again got captured in her and as a result he didn't realise that she was staring at him angrily. As soon as Sharon saw him, she remembered the inconvenience that he had caused her earlier this morning.



She opened her mouth and was about to say something to him when suddenly her mother called her from inside- "Sharon beta andar aao aur help karo papa ki T.V ki setting karne mein"
"Aghhh...!!! Baad mein dekh lungi ise!" and saying this she stormed inside her house angrily whereas Swayam was left standing there in his dreamy mode. Her name was ringing in his head continuously.
There was something in her which would pull him towards her everytime. That night Swayam slept the most peaceful sleep of his life. No matter what, he was determined to bring her in his life and he knew he surely will one day.
"Sharon!" he sighed as he closed his eyes. The most beautiful name he had ever heard



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Special thanks to Chamgadar(Ana) who forced me to write this os πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Cheater cock πŸ€—
Teri Pehli OS! I'm so excited sabke reaction!! Mere liye to ye best hai 😳 and ab finally jab sab jan bolenge tujhe pata chalege... Ki your a better writer than me πŸ˜‰
Want more OS from you.. But I know tujhe bahut hai padne ko πŸ˜›
Love you re πŸ€—
Aisa hi mast likhti rehna...
Thari chamgadar πŸ˜†
Edited by --Ana-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Toh yeh Astha ne likha hai.
Hi dear,πŸ˜›
It is a beautiful piece and I want more of this.
Will you mind continuing this story?
Edited by rose1998 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was jus beautiful
It was so clear sweet cute everything
The first sight was beautifully written
Well done
Today was best with so much vrushan and this jus added to it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hahaha...already lost and dreamy Swayam...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing shot
loved it ashta
if possible continue in two or three shots will love to read more on this topic
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was such a cute OS.. Very sweet 😳 Great work! πŸ‘πŸΌ
- Toree 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Asthuri πŸ€—
Loved it πŸ˜ƒ

Keep writing , this is awesomeπŸ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
Nice os
Loved reading it😊😊
Edited by pri98.arora - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awww that was damn beautiful
jst loved it
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