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Posted: 8 years ago
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SWAYAMMM!!!!! she almost yelled in his ear..
he woke up with a jerk
sw-wth! shar ye koi tareeka hai uthane ka?
sh-swayam aaj date kya hai?
sw-tumne ye puchne ke liye mujhe uthaya? (irritated)
sh-swayam aaj date kya hai? (she asked in a high pitch)
sw- 18 july!! toh??
sh-tum fir bhul gaye??
sw-kya(stil confused )
sh-aap kaise bhul sakte ho swayam aaj ka date!! srsly!! u don't love me anymore na!! mai aapko ab achhi nahi lagti na!! mai moti ho gayi hu na!! (nd goes down stairs crying)
sw-aaj kya ho sakta hai jo ye itna ghussa ho rahi hai.. (thinks for sometime)
FREAAKKK!! SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT U R SO DEAD TODAY!! KUCH KAR
sw called rey
rey-ha dude bol
sw-rey aaj mai office nahi aaunga
rey-kyu kya hua sab thik hai?? meri best friend theek hai na??
sw-ha rey sab thik hai woh kya hey mai aaj ka date bhul gaya swayam tells him what happened few minutes ago
rey-swayam tu kaise bhul sakta hai? usne tujhe AAP kar ke bola matlab wo bahot ghussa hai... tabhi AAP kar ke bulati hai tujhe
sw-mujhe pata hai yaar
rey-u know na she is 3 months pregnant toh mood swings he ye isliye aisa react kar rahi hai
chal chod or jaldi jaa nahi to KISS ANNIVERSARY ki jagah DEATH ANNIVERSARY ho jayegi teri
sw-REYY
rey-chal bye
At evening
Sharon is still angry on swayam for not remembering their kiss anniversary and open her cupboard.. she finds a white dress with a note
COME DOWN MRS. SHARON SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT!!
I m waiting!!

sharon blushes nd get ready and goes down
driver waits for her as soon as she comes down driver takes her to a isolated place
sh-Swayammm
swayam hugs her from behind and wishes in her ear huskily HAPPY KISS ANNIVERSARY SWEETHEART!!
sh-so mr. shekawat yaad aa gaya
sw-me bhula hi kab tha
toh chale
sh- kaha
sw-jaha koi aata jata
Sharon blushes hard
after 15 mins swayam stops his car and get down so does sharon
sw-hugged her ye jagah yaad hai
sh-kaise bhul sakti hu

FLASHBACK ALONE 9:30 PM
SWARON DRENCHED IN RAIN AND ARGUING
sw-chalo waha shelter hai waha chalte hai
in hut
swayam lite the fire
sharon sits
swayam- mujhe shayad ye jalana nahi chahiye tha mistake ho gayi
sh-kyu
sw-ager mai ye nahi jalata to tumhe thand lagti or tum mujhse itna dur nahi baithti
sh-oh per ye mistake thik bhi ho sakti hai.
sw-achha kaise
sharon shift little bit towards swayam and said itna pass thik hai
sw-galti same hi to hai
she shift little more and said ab thik hai
sw-thik hai but or better ho sakti hai
Sharon moved more ans said ab
sw-thoda or
sh-ab
sw-or thoda
sharon moved more close to swayam.
now they are very close to eachother almost hearing eachothers heartbeat
and then they shared their first kiss..
FLASHBACK ENDS
sw-humara first kiss ek dam filmy tha na
sh-haa.. achhaa suno
comes close to his ear and said seductively
26 ALPHABETS ARE NOT ENOUGH TO EXPRESS MY LOVE FOR YOU
swayam understands and without wasting a second he put his hot lips on her sweet pouty lips and they kiss passionately under the same hut where they had their first kiss five years ago..
sw-I love you jaan
sh-i love u more swayam

It's their yearly routine. every year on same date they came there remember their first kiss and kiss eachother passionately whispering those 3 magical words.

So how's this.. ..this is my 2nd work on this forum.. .plz do like and comment

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Your writing style is different from what the others possess here.
You make it really casual, which I guess is a good thing.
You write in a way where people don't need dictionaries to understand what do you mean. It's plain and simple.
And I like simple stuff!
Coming to the plot. It was cute.
The fact that they go to the same place again, proves their immense love for each other
The kiss was awesome though <3
Keep writing :)
You will keep improving :)
Loads of love
Ana โค๏ธ
Deepagoyal thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ana--

Your writing style is different from what the others possess here.

You make it really casual, which I guess is a good thing.
You write in a way where people don't need dictionaries to understand what do you mean. It's plain and simple.
And I like simple stuff!
Coming to the plot. It was cute.
The fact that they go to the same place again, proves their immense love for each other
The kiss was awesome though <3
Keep writing :)
You will keep improving :)
Loads of love
Ana โค๏ธ


Thank you so much...very encouraging words.. ...lots of thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Cute os
Swaron to i loved bt i also loved small reyaam convo..
Miss Reyaam a lot..
Keep writing๐Ÿ˜Š
Deepagoyal thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: ujwalv

Cute os

Swaron to i loved bt i also loved small reyaam convo..
Miss Reyaam a lot..
Keep writing๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank you so much
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sooo sweet nd cute
Sweet memories..
Loved it
Sharon is pregnent..wow
Totally loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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simply beautifull os... ๐Ÿ‘

short sweet n cute ๐Ÿ˜ณ

loved it... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Deepagoyal thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#8

thanks

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Deepagoyal thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: --RENU--

simply beautifull os... ๐Ÿ‘

short sweet n cute ๐Ÿ˜ณ

loved it... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Thank you so much
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Deepa
Tat was sweet and simple
And a very casual one that makes ur style of writing different
A very cute one and bought a smile for sure
Keep writing
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