Originally posted by: --Destiny--
Well this was really nice. I never read VruShan works except for one writer. Being very honest most precisely for the fact rarely people touch the basic traits of their relationship and goes over the top. Not there are many VruShan fics in place though. Main thing which I loved about the three part was detailing on small stuff, stuff that we have seen about them. Like the love for chocolates and some more were there. My favourite would be Shantanu's PoV and the last part. Shantanu's PoV is quite difficult to understand and then pen down on it. But pretty good work there. Really loved the YT thing, very intelligent pick there. These are so true :P " Usually He was very sorted and stable around everyone ...but around Her in public... He was always jumpy, unsure of His own actions..." xD xD Loved the last part. There was subtlety and really nicely done. Good job on connecting the Insta posts :P All the saves by Shantanu were very good. Very Shantanuish they were. The concept was very nicely set up and could relate somewhere. Like in an alternate universe this can happen :P I have to thank you for the Shantanu-Nimit thing in the end. Adore their bond a lot, and so liked it. Btw was the My Girl reference taken from the Radio IV of Trio on Radio Mirchi? Anyway. Good job. I enjoyed reading it.
P.S : A suggestion. Please avoid using capitalised Him and Her. Him with capital H mostly refers to God, which is why it was thoda weird in reading for me. You can italicise him or her for personification.
Also make a index on the first page. It would be easier for people to track the works.
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