Swaron SS : Unrequited Love - completed - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91
Pls do update...
ths was really nice...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
Such an awesome update Mishti Di πŸ‘
Loved it πŸ˜ƒ

I liked Sharon's POV throughout .,..😳

The end was beautiful

Now u gotta update soon soon Di πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
God what a update dii loved it

Sharon's pov was amazing like last time

like seriously she thrown her out of house or it
or it was a dream

Sharon's dairy memento for her and it was
beautiful did swayam cried because something else or did heard Sharon confession

why did he cry and sudden in his behavior

swaron moment was so simple yet to loving


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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
Hey keechu awesome update
Loved it 😊
Waiting fr swayam's POV
N plz plz update soonπŸ˜› cant wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95
Awesome!!
Loved it

amaxingg concept
ur writing style πŸ‘

waiting to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
ReswaπŸ˜†/Unreswa
Me first againπŸ˜†
Superb update
I desperately wanted to twist her neck. Suddenly she moved forward and tried to enter into my house, and I did what I thought a minute ago. I got hold of her hairs and pulled her out of my house. i love this scene very muchπŸ˜†
Beautiful written
All scene u describe very beautifully
Sharon pov was awsm
End was lovely
Now waiting for nxt
Update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
awsum update di...
Sharon's pov ws nice...
god Sharon rocked...
she actually kicked her out of D house...
end part ws luvly...
update soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
Hello
That's such a beautiful update
The. Pain the feelings are well penned
The pain and hurt of both of them are amazingly written
The whole update jus made me want to read more..
It was long enough 4 d wait and defo worth reading
Now its already 29likes
Hoping 4 a quicker update here cand ur other ff too
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
Beautiful update There was so much subtlety in this chapter that i wanted to keep on reading.. Sharon's p.o.v was nicely explained.. Glad that She threw that Jia out of her house! Well done Sharon πŸ˜† Guess Swayam read her diary. Well good...now he'll realise how much Sharon loves him and that he should not let her go. Eagerly waiting to read how the story unfolds.. please update soon.
P.S. Thankuu for the pm πŸ˜ƒ
-Toree 😊
Edited by -Toree_B- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sneharay

Thanks for the update..
Its nice..last part was awesome
And thanks for pm nd update soon 😊


Thank u πŸ˜›
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