Really loved the start...
The concept and the characterization of both swayam and sharon was too good...its a nice feeling to read a fresh story after a long time...
and i really enjoyed...
These days i have lost the interest to read ff here but your this work hooked me up. and im waiting for more updates from you...
I always loved to read your works and will do in future too.
And the talk between swaron was nice, there was a comfortable awkwardness which i felt while reading that part and i loved that...
swayam as an open book, hmm im not so ok with it 😛as im very close person so even i felt a squeeze in my heart when i read that part where u have said about swayam being open to his feeling. i really felt that way.
"Sharon was amused. She had never met a person with such an open heart and open feelings laid out there in open for everyone to see. Swayam was completely fine with whatever went wrong in his life and he didn't mind telling them to anyone, like he could never be embarrassed of himself. She couldn't fathom what made him so open, so resistant to vulnerability."
And this part really impressed me. i dont know why but i loved it the most in whole update.
After reading these lines im feeling like im very much scared to be open 😆
Thanku for the update and pm...
Continue soon
Keechu ;)
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