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Posted: 9 years ago
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Holla guys ,
It has been a long time well here is a small story of Taani and Swayam, celebrating the brother sister bond.
Hope you guys like it !


Aadi maadi

Guy goro

Bachedo chutgyo

Dudu piygyo an

Bhagyooo...

"Hahaha"

" bas TD"🀣 heehe ," ab aur gud heehe gudi nai, oui hehehe"🀣

"Ok lo sun Li tumhari baat, ruk gayi, lekin Dia ko mujhe ek promise karna padega abhi"

"Kaisa promise?"πŸ˜•

"Yahi ki ab Dia apne bhaiya se kabhi bhi itna naraz nahi hogi"

"Par TD bhaiya ne apna promise tod diya" *pout*πŸ˜’

"Toh kya hua , bhaiya tumse pyar karte hai , aur tumhe duniya ki har khushi mile isiliye toh din raat kam karte hai, aur fir unhone tumhe sorry bhi bola na?"

"Ha TD par fir bhi..."

"Par var kuch nai jaise tumhari teacher strict hai, homework na karne par jaise who tumhe punish karti hai , waise hi Bhaiya ke boss bhi unhe punish karte hai"

"Sachhi?"😲

"Mucchi "

"TD socho na bhaiya kitna funny lagega murga bante hue" "hahaha"πŸ˜†

"Dhat , jao aur apne bhaiya ko ek mast si Jhappi aur pyar bhari papi de aao , go..."

"Bye TD thank you!!"

"Bye !!"

Thandi si yeh hawa aksar hame apno ki yaad dilati hai, unke saath bitaye hua lamho ko firse zinda kar deti hai..

Baarish ka yeh mausam sab ko apne pyar, mohabbat ki yaad dilaata hai , par mere liye yeh mausam itna suhana nahi hai,

*Flashback*

"Taani meri baat toh suno,"

"Nahi bhaiyu aap bahut bure ho , bina mujhse puche aise kaise decision le liya?"

"Taani, ye sab tumhari bhalai ke liye hai"

*sobbing* no bhaiyu !!

Swayam holds back his tears and holds taanis chin

"Dekh jab tu badi ho jayegi, bahut naam kamaygi, apna khud ka ghar kharedegi , tab tu samajhegi kiTere bhai ne tujhe apnese dur kyu kiya tha"

Taani looks at Swayam , his eyes were brimming with tears , but he had a smile plastered to his face

"Bhaiyu , kya aap apna acche se khayal rakhenge?"

"Haan sirf apna hi nahi, mai tumhari Pari ka bhi khayal rakhunga."

Taani has a little smile😊

"Taani "

"Haan bhaiyu"

"Tu mujhe bhulegi nahi na"

Taani hugs him tight " Nahi bhaiyu , kaise bhul sakti hun mai aapko, aap toh meri duniya ho, mai aapko wapas tang karne jarur aaungi , aur aapke liye acchi si gear waali cycle bhi laungi "


So amigos , this was the first part , yeah I know it is a little short but I hope you like it.

I would love to see your comments !!! 😊

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putti_taarey thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start...
Taayam part was good..
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update soon missing taayam
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Taayam are my first love both are always cute
though i didn't understand the first part of your story but Taayam were cute
even the dialogue
who is TD and Dia?
anyways i loved it
update soon
pm me if possible

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Posted: 9 years ago
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looking interesting
looking forward to read this
update it soon n do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shrisha...

Taayam are my first love both are always cute

though i didn't understand the first part of your story but Taayam were cute
even the dialogue
who is TD and Dia?
anyways i loved it
update soon
pm me if possible

Well I am sorry , I should have made it clear
Dia is just a little kid and TD is Taani Didi
The 1st part was just to show that Taani feels incomplete , she is lonely being away from Swayam.
She tries to protect and cherish the brother - sister relationship even if it someone else's.
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: putti_taarey

Awesome start...
Taayam part was good..
Update soon

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess_tara

looking interesting

looking forward to read this
update it soon n do pm me

Yup I will.
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsmmm strt dr
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --coco--

Well I am sorry , I should have made it clear
Dia is just a little kid and TD is Taani Didi
The 1st part was just to show that Taani feels incomplete , she is lonely being away from Swayam.
She tries to protect and cherish the brother - sister relationship even if it someone else's.
😊

don't be its ok
i understand it
it would be a treat to read😊
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