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Posted: 9 years ago
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So,hello.I am back.I didn't really try on continuing with the previous OS,sorry for that.I know many wished to read more from it.But I tried to write another one..a little different and weird maybe.Hope you all like it. smile emoticon

P.S- I was really very sceptical about posting things here..but thank you all for your kind words,it really encouraged me to think about it! 😊


-SwaRon-OS-Sacrifice-


Phone rings.The call gets picked up at Swayam's house.

"Guess what, I am pregnant"

Swayam smiles.He is so happy to hear this news.He blushes with both his cheeks turning almost red.He knew..she loved babies.She always did no matter how weird, quirky and cute they are but more than that she loved kids. And he knew she wouldn't wait to see her own baby growing up into a little less weird but still cute, quirky child.She always wanted this.Today must be her dream day.She must be on the top of the mountain.

He still couldn't believe what he had just heard.Slowly realising that this is real and not any imagination,he turned numb.Standing there facing the wall.He felt his eyes teary when..

"Hey Swayam what's up,did you hear Sharon's news!" asks his wife

*smiles* "Yes I did.Wish them from my side too please!"

Yes he loved her,but she wasn't his.Destiny as they say doesn't give you everything you want.Right from the start he had lived a perfect life, he still was and was sure he would be ahead.He was happy with many choices he made.They had brought him to such a point of life for him where he had everything damn thing he ever wished for but HER.


"Hey Sharon,hello ? Anybody there ? "
Sharon had heard him say as the phone had always been on speaker.And those words made her loose her presence of mind..in his voice.

"Yes Simmi,I am here! " she came back to senses hearing Simmi's voice.

"Swayam just wished you both too! "

"Oh..Thank him from my..umm our side too! BYE "

Hearing this Swayam closed his eyes and a drop of tear crawled down his face.
While Sharon cut the call and the only words that came out her were "I hope you still love me."

Sacrifice is what makes you stronger, better person.They both loved each other from ages but so did their other half's and so they had decided to move with their own lives..and test the destiny.
They weren't weak.They were ready to take it all.

-AsH-
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flyinghigh_ani thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res
unres

beautifully written again...
thank you so much for sharing it with us...
although its very hard to imagine swaron "not being together"
and to top it all , they are with someone else...😭😭

but anyways you did justice to the plot by writing it so well and emoting it in a few words...

keep writing... we want new writings from you!!!

thanks...

ani
Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 9 years ago
aishamathur thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: flyinghigh_ani

res

unres

beautifully written again...
thank you so much for sharing it with us...
although its very hard to imagine swaron "not being together"
and to top it all , they are with someone else...😭😭

but anyways you did justice to the plot by writing it so well and emoting it in a few words...

keep writing... we want new writings from you!!!

thanks...

ani



Ab tu yaha bhi peeche padegiπŸ˜†πŸ˜› Thanku once again.And you know my writing pace so :3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I m crying after reading this 😭

but what u have written is totaly amazing πŸ‘

its unique concept loved it...

do write more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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unres

sry ..i'm always late at unresing ..πŸ˜›

It was a superb os πŸ‘

the way you penned down their emotions ...it's superb..

y are you skeptical about posting ur work ..? ...u r too good ..

pls write more...

i have a request right now...

can you convert this os into an ss ? i promise to comment regularly πŸ˜ƒ

trust me ..it'll serve as a wonderful prologue of a beautiful ss ..

pls give it a try ..

as i already said you are an awesome writer..! pls write more and more ..

i love reading new things ...thanks ani for the pm..

cheers ! 😳

Lavanya

Edited by --lavanya-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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painfully beautiful story... dnt knw what to say... it made me sad dat swaron r not together here. bt d depth of d story made me think... keep writing dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice story
im getting emotional
yup hard to imagine swaron with someone else
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Posted: 9 years ago
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One of the best emotional SwaRon OS :(
So what they aren't together, this piece of writing express their true love :')

Keep writing πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really superb one...

u r amazing..

can imagine eachother's feeling and expressions through ur writings...

keep it up

Love,
Shirisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful
bt its hard to imagine swaron nt together😭 😭 😭
Edited by ujwalv - 9 years ago
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