Swaron FF: An Unforgettable Mistake (Updated Chapter 13) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Read all parts together...
very beautifully written...
loved the story line..
Keep writing :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Hey..very nice update!!
They both love each other so much
But still hurting each other
He gifted her a car😳
Hope to see some light moments between them
In future updates
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
There heated arguments..
Nicely written
The pain was visible in their actions.

Poor aron should have listened her..
Gifted her a car
Nice
Thanks 4 d pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
This is something really good
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
just read all d updates... & i must say its awsmly penned... interesting story... keep writing... waiting for next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
waiting for this ff to be updated... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
amazing update πŸ‘
they r hurting each other 😭😭bt i do feel that they still love eachother very much..
just hope that this hate feeling jaldi love mein badal jaye..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Readed all chp's in one go .. all wer amazing
i luved every chp nd flashback wer awsum
SwaRon are too different in dis story ...story has started tkng new twist n turns waiting for future upd's

plz do pm me whn u upd nxt chp

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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
High on emotions πŸ‘ can't believe Swayam actually forced himself upon her!! 😲 It hurts to see them hurting each other like this 😭 Please update sooonnn... can't wait to read further...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Read all chapter in one go.
Awesome characterization.
Swaron both are strong headed. Love each other yet hurt each otyer.
Intense story.
Sharon characteris very interesting. She is todays women, who will not sacrifice herself for love and babies.
I am intrigued. Update soon will love to read.
You are great writer. Very well penned.
Do pm me next when you update.
Thanks
-Shivani
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