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Hi Neet,
The plot line of your story is riveting.
I find this story so incredibly relatable. I'm a law student myself and my boyfriend is an investment banker - uncanny right?
In fact our entire friend circle consists of lawyers and investment bankers, which is exactly why I know how we react and behave.
At the beginning, you nailed their characterisation. I liked the way Sharon and Swayam were portrayed - very real.
While the angsty romance dominates the storyline, I would love to see a legal drama/ or corporate conflict unfold as a sub-plot. I'm only suggesting this, because I feel like you have the capacity to write this.
I read most of the stories on the D3 Forum and believe me when I say., that I only comment on the work I genuinely like.
So far, this story is intricately crafted and I would love to see where you go from here.
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