SWARON FF : BEYOND COMMITMENT #2 EPILOGUE UPDATED - Page 3

Shradha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Nice one really loved it...

😊 👏

Loved ur writings...

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Renu Rajpurohit

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

wow... loved it...
perfect ending for this ff...
will miss this ff...
nd congrats for second thread... it proves that how awsm u r as a writer...
thanx for pm...

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LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Ani totally confused with what to write ...😆 i was never like this lose of words to comment on ur ffs. 😳now i really dont have anything to write...

but im tooo sad today.😭 it was just freaking awesome...😭

this too came to end... and when will i get to read next... think fast.. 😉

And as like all the chapter u have written until now this epilogue too was amazing ... it was not Sharon who was in this part. . it was cookie swayam's cookie .. and it was adorably cute... utter cute...

Loved it the whole update... tooo cute epilogue👏

update the next ffs soon...im waiting 😃

Keechu di🤗

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--Ecstasy--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Finally here the epilogue is, I was waiting for it.

This ff was very fun to read, a sweet and cute story of two friends who got married to each and later fall in love, well actually one was aware of her feelings before marriage but the other one after marriage.

The concept was amazing, I loved the writing style, The humor you bring in ur stories, it becomes more interesting to read.

Coming to this epilogue, I adore swaron bond here, they vil fight on silly things, irritate each other then will make up. Their relationship is really Beyond Commitment.

Loved the whole story...

Keep writing!

-Shivani

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Trupti Tamore

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Ani amazing end

sharon was cutie pie is dis upd n swayam as it your wish is my command

Whole family oly cruse swayam haha
n sharon such a drama queen thodi thodi thgt par crying

1st horror dn comedy n agn horror haha gosh kya bolu shAron k liye

nd cookie q nhi bola uspe b rona :O

Amazing EPILOGUE

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gofi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Hey..very cute epilogue

Ur this ff was awsome

I read it in one go

U r an awsome writer

Keep writing😊

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PRACHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

wow such a beautiful ending
yeh sharon n uske mood swings becahara swayam
n usse bhi bechara rey poor he...
loved it
such a awesome story

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aishamathur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Eeep it was so cute.😆

Sharon ke mood swings😳 and becahara swayam 😆😆😛

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prajana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

I hv never read a more cuter thing than this

Poor swayam!! Sharon is really giving him a tough time

Nd that more mauve nd less mauve vala part was the most hillarious😳

The way you ended the epilogue was awsome👏

U are seriously an awsome writer!

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meenal singh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

An awesome swaron journey
from being best freind to best couple
from keeping a stationery diary to chalti phirti diary
from being an introvert sharon to an expressive sharon
Starting from sharon's love to swayam's realization to his confession and her confession
it was great
Do write more
because u do understand your characters well and that makes ur work interesting..

So plz write more and pm me

Edited by 8085548022 - 9 years ago

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