Originally posted by: --Ecstasy--
Hey Shrisha first of all i wanna say I don't know about ur previous works, this is the first time I am reading ur story. And you are a fantastic writer.
Thank you for writing this on swaron.I loved your writing style. Very refreshing. It has a bit of poetic touch in it.Coming to first chapter,The way you described Mumbai city was beautiful.And also Rai Prakash Mansion atmosphere when they heard about Sharon's arrival. Nice.. It gives an idea of Sharon is..Swayam love for Sharon is unconditional, as the concept is - he is just a worker in this mansion, and Sharon ofcourse owner of it. I wanna see how their love blossoms, despite status difference.Swayam has seen every layers of Sharon since childhood, nobody cares for his feelings. But still his love for Sharon hasn't changed.Waiting for Sharon's arrival and swaron encounter.I really looking forward to read this story till end, please never think of discontinuing it..Hoping for regular updates..Thank you for PM.-Shivani
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