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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: --Ecstasy--

Hey Shrisha first of all i wanna say I don't know about ur previous works, this is the first time I am reading ur story. And you are a fantastic writer.


Thank you for writing this on swaron.

I loved your writing style. Very refreshing. It has a bit of poetic touch in it.

Coming to first chapter,

The way you described Mumbai city was beautiful.
And also Rai Prakash Mansion atmosphere when they heard about Sharon's arrival. Nice.. It gives an idea of Sharon is..

Swayam love for Sharon is unconditional, as the concept is - he is just a worker in this mansion, and Sharon ofcourse owner of it. I wanna see how their love blossoms, despite status difference.

Swayam has seen every layers of Sharon since childhood, nobody cares for his feelings. But still his love for Sharon hasn't changed.
Waiting for Sharon's arrival and swaron encounter.

I really looking forward to read this story till end, please never think of discontinuing it..

Hoping for regular updates..

Thank you for PM.

-Shivani

thankyou so much
i am so glad you loved it Shivani
that too this much this was really unexpected
i never even expected much comments but i am really glad
thanks alot for liking my writing style
after almost exploiting my computers for years i learnt to write
writing kind of because my favourite hobby
it gives me pleasure
coming to Swaron
after Vrushika came i became a Swaron fan myself
and remembering what swayam first was when the show started
i felt Swaron are best for this
and story i promise you it would be amazing
Swayam is my favourite character
but i promise Sharon is also something you love
and swaron encounter its already penned down
i hope you'll like it
don't worry most probably i am completing
you'll get regular updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: SHA_85

Amazing start Shrisha

Nt accepted yitna aacha wala uod hoga

swayam's POV was FABULOUS never read dis type of POV of any1 (i do follow swaron n taarey ff bt dis kind of POV never )

n obvious swayam h tho uska POV should be lyk swayam 1 oly

so yes u r amazing writer

nw m being utavli kab upd hoga

thanx a lot for pm drlng luv u for dis upd

plzz jaldi upd karna


thankyou so much
glad you liked it
i am not that good of a writer there are many fabulopus writers in this forums
ha Swayam hai to uske jaisa hi hona chahiye
don't thank me for pms
i should thank you for comments
and ya i'll update soon
Edited by taarey17 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: gsk4

Its Awesome Story. ๐Ÿ‘. I loved Swayam's POV. His love and dedication towards Sharon even though she is not there for past five years. I cant imagine such a guy exists but everyone dreamsthat their boyfriend to be like Swayam. I am little put out when you showed Sharon's character as hard shell with stone fish not soft fish and extremely very rude and arrogant. i am anxious how you are going to show Sharon in the SS. I somehow cant stand girls being so rude and arrogant absolutely no good qualities. But i am trusting that you have some kind of plan to make her acceptable. The first chapter is out of this world and i loved it. Please update fast.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

thankyou so much dear
i am glad you liked it
ya Swayam is really a guy out of dreams
coming to Sharon i will make her acceptable
i promise
i made her extremely rude only because face the fact this is how rich brats are
sweet and humble isn't for rich
you'll love Sharon too
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Beautifully described chapter๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Loved it..

Loved swayam's character..i always do๐Ÿ˜›

loved swayam's POV abt his sharon nd the way u described his love fr sharon liked it๐Ÿ˜Š

Update soon

Waiting fr swaron meet n hw der story progress.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Nice chapter...loved it...whn i read the intro part,first thing came to my mind ws yeh hai aashique...but reading the story with swaron ws new...looking forward for the story...you hav described swayams heart beautifully...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Hey Shrisha,
I loved the chappy
The way you describe mumbai..
Mr rai prakash nd especially swayam's pov is awesome

Finally his sharon mam is coming..
Finally

Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: ujwalv

Beautifully described chapter๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Loved it..

Loved swayam's character..i always do๐Ÿ˜›

loved swayam's POV abt his sharon nd the way u described his love fr sharon liked it๐Ÿ˜Š

Update soon

Waiting fr swaron meet n hw der story progress.

thankyou so much
glad you liked it
Swayam's character has much more in store
will update soon
Swaron meet in next chapter most probably
thanks alot dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: vrushanlove

Nice chapter...loved it...whn i read the intro part,first thing came to my mind ws yeh hai aashique...but reading the story with swaron ws new...looking forward for the story...you hav described swayams heart beautifully...


thankyou so much
glad you liked it
coming to yeh hai Ashiqui
i actually wanted to give it that title
i don't know if such an episode even aired or something
half the way is my imagination
but then i thought why to borrow someone's else's title
so made of my own
infinity means beyond limits
Swaron love wuld be beyond every social limits
true pure
and Swaron as i said when i closed my eyes the first couple came in my mind was Swaron
glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Hey Shrisha,
I loved the chappy
The way you describe mumbai..
Mr rai prakash nd especially swayam's pov is awesome

Finally his sharon mam is coming..
Finally

Thanks 4 d pm


thankyou so much
glad you liked it
Swayam is my personal favorite character
Mr. Rai Prakash...
i may have said proud smile but that was back when Sharon was born
now he is cunning money minded business tycoon
Sharon ma'am the only reason i said ma'am is because Swayam is the servent there
and i am making this purely english atleast untill i feel some hindi sentenses describes their emotions better i'll put the translations too
and Sharon she is going to come like a blast
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: taarey17

thankyou so much
i am so glad you loved it Shivani
that too this much this was really unexpected
i never even expected much comments but i am really glad
thanks alot for liking my writing style
after almost exploiting my computers for years i learnt to write
writing kind of because my favourite hobby
it gives me pleasure
coming to Swaron
after Vrushika came i became a Swaron fan myself
and remembering what swayam first was when the show started
i felt Swaron are best for this
and story i promise you it would be amazing
Swayam is my favourite character
but i promise Sharon is also something you love
and swaron encounter its already penned down
i hope you'll like it
don't worry most probably i am completing
you'll get regular updates


Well I am really looking forward to it now, Update soon.. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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