Nice I like the way u keep us on the edge at every update...
But darl dont take too long to update next one...π
Nice I like the way u keep us on the edge at every update...
But darl dont take too long to update next one...π
Originally posted by: swaronaaliya
Hey amazing chapter.sharon is scared of getting hurt.do continue soon.thanks for pm.
Originally posted by: sneharay
Nice update..
Waiting for next part..
Update ASAP.. π
Originally posted by: existentialism
The update was good but I want to read further. The feisty Sharon, scolding poor souls. That is not at all good. She should have screamed at Swayam instead for not noticing a cart coming her way. (Am a devil, I know that:-P). I wanna know their past, I wanna know everything. Update soon, pllleeaashh.(Which also includes your other on-going works).
Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya
It was a nice chapter but too short I'll say..:P...please update soon!..I guess both Rey and Taani are going to be involved in everything now...hopefully that will help Swaron come closer:)..
Eager to know what happened in the past!update soon
Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
This is going great..
Finally they are home..
Hope Sharon will be able to trust again..
This phone call is a mystery..
Solve it soon
Thanks
Originally posted by: mythreyii
Hey keechu
Beautiful update too good
The way the story is moving is jus keeping us stuck to it
A lovely chap dedicated wholly to our fiesty sharon.
For me this chap was perfectly fine and rather a well needed part to understand the current thoughts of Sharon jus lovely
Ur writing is super owsm it definitely has a style and touch
Few lines in the update was very beautiful
The way u have put up shares fear pain POV is owsm.
And the call is jus making the story all the more interesting
Waiting next one
The update was good and very important
You penned down sharon's inner turmoil beautifullyThe phone call is a big misteryAnd so is their pastI really want to know the whole thing right nowI also badly want to see tani and ray's reaction to this changed sharonπPlz update soonπ
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