👍🏼👏👏amazing part dii😃
the most thing i like was swayam's pov because he didn't hurry up with things(b/w head and heart) at least he take time for clearing his confusion😃 (pata nahi kab uski confusion aap clear karne wale ho and meri bhi😕 ) and swayam's and pia small convo was really cute😊
" but I promise I will come here once again and then I will take you with me. It is my promise. I will wait for you until you give me a chance. Bye Sharon. Take care." i just loved this was highlight for me i really enjoyed his part because he did promised her he ll be back to take her 😃👏
but sharon ne toh shock dia 440 ka she is going with him😲 my god really she did give him chance that to so easily(but doubt toh tha bcz of last upd)
flight ka yitu sa scene se aap ne hum sab ko buttering kiya 😵 seriously but ya it was awesome (obvious hona hi chahiye its SwaRon 😳 hume toh jhadu romance bhi accha lagta hai 😃 )
she loves him so much that after hurting so much still she didn't allow herself to hate him and don't want to see him weak and i don't understand what kind of love sharon have for him😕 ,her part was for only one passage but the way you penned her love for him was brilliantly fabulous 👏👍🏼
last me toh app ne dil hi tod dala mera🥺💔
she going for taarey 🤢but no i think she just said to him because in her pov last line was I need to trust him all over again. I need to start from the one. so i think so but don't know (am a confused case)
all over this update was happy 😃 shock😲 heart broken💔 and hope wali but the way you have written was👍🏼
Edited by SHA_85 - 8 years ago
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