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Ye chapter best tha iss ff ka
Loved it
loved it
loved it
Ah!! Didu kya likha hai
Beautiful re
Swayam ne jaise apna dil kholke rakha
Changed Sharon ne jo answer kiya
Matlabb vo saare emotions sab itne ache se express kiya

No, Taani in this. Agar wo taani ke lite sharon ko wapis laa raha hai toh ye chapter ka kya matlabb
nai !!
Aur sharon usse obviously maaf karegi par thora time toh lena he chahiye na
Swayam se jara mehnat toh karaye

Love u didu🤗
Keep writing 😃

The update is awsome..as always

Hey keechu
Lovely update dude
The whole Update is written beautifully by you
The words swayum said to sharon after the kiss stole the update..!! The way he said how much he misses her in his life and how much he wants her in his life
Sharon's words were aptly written and jus perfect
Giving in too early would have not been good
Her expression and thoughts are well written
Loved the way u penned swayum said his feelings falling on knee and Sharon thinking over it.
Well I wish he does not take taanis name and kill things and considering Sharon's I think she would give him a chance..
Well written piece of work

Awesome update.

Loved swayam in this update

Sharon should give him one chance..only after lot of efforts by swayam😉

He shouldn't bring taani's topic it will create misunderstanding

Loved it

Nice update. Swayyam was extremely cruel to her. Throwing her out of the house with divorce papers and that too knowing that she was an orphan. Tanni might cause misunderstandings but i think thats needed in Swayam's life to earn his keep. first, all of a sudden he meets her and with in 24 hrs he declares loves when for six months he ignored and hurt her every occasion. Second chances are for people who genuinly regret their actions. He did not even try to find her after he threw her out. Who believes when he simply kisses and say i love you. I don't why should Sharon. Let Tanni come let the misconceptions be there. if he really loves her. let him fight for her. This is too easy. He saw her, he declared his love and he gets a second chance?? just like that?? Oh please Let Sharon have some backbone..

Originally posted by: sbhanot65

Hey keechu awesome update...

Really liking d pace of d story

Sharon should give swayam a chance

Bt only after witnessing his love

I think Tani's name will cause misunderstanding b/w dem

Bt I guess nt nw

Nd plz I want to c a jealous swayam in upcoming update

If story dsnt need it...Its ohk

U r an amazing writer...keep up d gd work

Originally posted by: koms_vrushan

wonderfull update. sharon's pov is right she cant give him a chance so easily swayam have to prove himself he needs to gain sharon trust then he should propose her confess her this is what i think and he shouldn't bring taani matter here. swayam craving for her presence in his life is discribed very thoughtfully. sharon justification is also well done. keechu u r simply superb dear.

Originally posted by: aneesha93

Nice update. I want Sharon to give him a chance but he should prove that he is worth it. It should not be for Taani.

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: existentialism

The update was good. For a while, I really thought Swayam has split personality. The sought of mood swings that guy has. I really liked that part, where he is guilty and broken on one side & yet turns cruel and rude when she refused him.

Well, to answer your question, I would like Sharon to give him a chance. Everybody deserves a second chance. But, I want her to take her time & analyze everything. I don't want her to give him a chance in a hurry burry just coz she saw love in his eyes. And please, no Taani here. SwaRon love each other. I want Swayam to admit that wholeheartedly. Bringing her back to his life for the sake of his sister is so not acceptable. So, a big fat NO to that.!